Ishi-- Last of a Tribe

He emerged from gold lands, far and near, only skin and bones, and windswept loam. He forged through thistles, confusion and fear, wore a river on his back, and a cloak of home draped over his shoulders, into worlds unknown Tears ran rivulets on the white man's ground drenched with forgiveness, from a crying sun,.... and the eyes of a Yahi...from a tribe,..... since gone
------------------------------------------------------------- For Deb's Contest: "8 Lines, Any kind" http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ishi

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Date: 2/22/2013 5:49:00 PM
your poetry is lovely , I like what I read, ~SKAT
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Date: 1/15/2013 8:51:00 AM
Carrie, congrats~~~~ an epic end ... enjoyed...pd
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Date: 1/13/2013 9:22:00 PM
Ive read stories about Ishi...I think his brain is perserved somewhere. Love your write and congrats. BG
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Date: 1/13/2013 1:59:00 PM
What a life that man had, it wasn't an easy one, probably a very lonely one too, but it seems he can finally rest with all of him in one place. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/13/2013 6:10:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win, stunning image...David
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Date: 1/13/2013 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie luv xx
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Date: 1/13/2013 1:48:00 AM
Sad tale, wel Told with such few lines. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/12/2013 8:13:00 PM
Congrats Carrie I enjoyed reading your poem....Seren
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Date: 1/11/2013 1:49:00 PM
A truly lovely poem Carrie. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/11/2013 12:15:00 PM
Hoping that this is a winner in Deb's contest..I need to check it out..I like the way it is put together..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/8/2013 5:34:00 PM
hi dear Carrie... very well written ..i like this one my dear and congratulation for the concert..all the best :) <3 SK
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Date: 1/7/2013 7:52:00 PM
Well told story, based on the warmth you expressed through your comment, I expected to like your writing. You did not dissapoint. I really like your poem.
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Date: 1/7/2013 8:57:00 AM
Another great poem on the theme of the contest.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 1/6/2013 9:00:00 AM
A great one Carrie so nice to see you stretching into unfamiliar territory regarding the topic. I loved the enternal rhyme [not that this needs changing AT all..but for fun since your meter is so nice..I bet you could plump the tale into Blank Verse] ohhhhh too I loved the internal rhyme! Light & Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/6/2013 9:13:00 AM
http://history.library.ucsf.edu/ishi.html I enjoyed this further info perhaps others would?
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