Isberg

Steaming out on her maiden voyage Lifeboats bob chaotically in the screaming waters

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2010 2:50:00 PM

AHA, could be for the Titanic! I love that phrase screaming waters!!! Luv,Andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/10/2010 7:21:00 AM

tragic and definitely heats up the imagination.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/9/2010 5:39:00 PM

UT oh!!!!This is one Titanic verse! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2010 4:28:00 PM

Filling in of the lines could write a book. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/7/2010 6:13:00 PM

Tells it all, James, well done...Margaret

Date: 2/7/2010 2:48:00 PM

Interesting use of the challenging form. I like the personification in the second line. If this is for Brian's contest, best wishes. Karen

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 2/7/2010 2:41:00 PM

Awesome James! Jeralynn