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Is This Real

I see her eyes and I get lost A smile of unending joy Beauty that stops time I see her eyes and it hurts I've stayed away Hoping these feelings will fade I see her again, and nothing's changed Is this real or false romantics Blinded by true love's desire A longing unfulfilled Talent brimming Wonderfully Sweet and Kind Quirky mind, loveable humor Different in every good way Is this real Do I risk my heart Can she even see me Am I as invisible as I feel

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/13/2014 12:09:00 AM

JE,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/11/2014 11:28:00 AM

A wonderfully introspective ending to your poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you click on a name or avatar... You will be taken to their poetry. If you leave a comment, then they will have a permanent link back to your poetry."

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2014 8:29:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Je - I choose your first lovely written ABC poem :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Secrets Inyoureyes

Date: 8/10/2014 5:59:00 AM

This is beautiful and touching...

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2014 11:56:00 AM

aww I hope she can see you as this is a beautiful write full of longing and hope:-) Hugs jan xxx

Je Pl
Date: 8/9/2014 12:22:00 PM

Thanks Jan