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Is This a Dream

Trancelike I wander in a dreamlike world. Colors surround me – shadowy and swirled. How did I get here? I feel so unreal. Is this a dream or life hazy and surreal? I pinch myself, but I cannot awake. My hands once steady now begin to shake. I feel I have gone to another plane - another dimension. Am I born again? Did I die somehow, perhaps in my sleep? Am I here alone? I begin to weep. But someone is coming! Their face I can’t see. A ghost? A person imaginary? Shadows’ hues that had been surrounding me have become ethereal imagery. Colors more lovely than I’ve ever seen glow brightly like grass that’s greener than green. Indescribable are all of the hues - the reds and purples, the yellows and blues! My brother Dale who died thirty-five years ago is he who approaches! Where I am – I now know! May 27, 2021 For the Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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Date: 6/2/2021 3:24:00 PM
Andrea, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, love - Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:12:00 PM
Great, As Usual. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/30/2021 9:43:00 AM
Beautiful cadence and structure in your couplets, Andrea. Nice subject matter and great rhymes. Very nicely written.
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Date: 5/28/2021 6:50:00 AM
Marvelously done, Andrea;-) I really liked it. Good luck in Constance's contest!
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Date: 5/28/2021 6:18:00 AM
Your verse conveys the feeling of dreams very well. The beauty, yet questions of the disconnection. The questions answered in the last line I found heartening.
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Date: 5/28/2021 6:12:00 AM
Such a real dream, Andrea, you have done well with the given eight words:) those last two lines simply cinch it:)
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Date: 5/27/2021 9:32:00 AM
A beautiful job of describing something indescribable...except in a dream or a vision. I loved it. Best wishes in the contest, Andrea.
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Date: 5/27/2021 3:18:00 AM
All eight words perfectly used Andrea... Beautifully penned... I know... sometimes we have to pinch ourselves to know what we saw was real or imaginary.. Amazing take of the contest... flowing with imagery and rhymes... Last two lines... someday, we all will be there dear friend... I am still figuring out what to write for this contest...Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 5/27/2021 1:54:00 AM
You used those chosen words perfectly I was going to write another one but was not allowed to. Don't think of death too much. God is compassionate.
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Date: 5/27/2021 1:48:00 AM
I wonder will death be like that Andrea, Tom
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