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Is There Something You Want To Tell Me

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Your eyes, they take me in with every glance Your stance and gesture speak of sweet romance Your lips are curling in flirtatious smile You flip your hair and make me stare awhile But.... is there something you want to tell me? Your movement shouts to me of passion's fire Your manly aura makes me drip desire Your body speaks a language savage, bold I know you'll have me right in wanton hold But....is there something you want to tell me? You need to ASK to taste my lips so sweet The words will make my dress fall at your feet Articulate in rhyme just what you need and Baby boy, your cravings I will feed But first, is there something you want to tell me? Eileen Manassian June 29, 2015 For Judy Konos's Contest Is There Something You Want to Tell Me?

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2015 7:18:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this romantic award winning piece again!

Skat A

Date: 7/6/2015 8:26:00 PM

this is a sweet Eileen, :) SKAT

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 7/6/2015 6:38:00 AM

See, I told you, my entry didn't even make the poop list----but thats Ok, I like Judy----Congratulation on your placement

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/6/2015 3:33:00 AM

Absolutely stunning piece... love the refrain, and just love the whole thing! Congratulations on your win ! Well deserved indeed :)

Shane Cooper

Date: 7/6/2015 1:58:00 AM

My enchantress, congratulations on your first place. Another wonderfully seductive poem. Who could not answer you ?

Lee Carter

Date: 7/6/2015 12:16:00 AM

Congrats Eileen !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/5/2015 10:44:00 PM

Ah Eileen this is so wonderful,, Congrats on ur win dear!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/5/2015 9:17:00 PM

Eileen, Congrats on your win. LINDA

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/5/2015 6:10:00 PM

It appears I have an eye for quality, congrats on first place finish. Hugs Rick.

Judy Konos

Date: 7/5/2015 9:12:00 AM

Thank You for entering my contest.

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 7/3/2015 5:18:00 PM

Thanks Eileen for stopping by and for the kind comment----I would not under estimate your entry though, I think it's top shelf

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/30/2015 8:47:00 AM

I would be surprised if she didn't like it. I hope you have a perfect day Eileen. If you have time I'm curious to hear your thoughts on my smoking section poem.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/30/2015 12:01:00 PM

I'm on my way, Richard. Thanks for the visit. My day wasn't bad. I have an easier summer schedule. I can finally delve into poetry and escape. Hugs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/30/2015 2:05:00 AM

Oolalalala Eileen....What a sensual and beautiful poem-'The words will make my dress fall at your feet' ,I really love that line.A superb poem Lady : ).

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/30/2015 12:00:00 PM

Thanks, my dear Soul Sister. You've been away. I hope all is well. Hugs

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/29/2015 9:53:00 PM

Very nice!!! I'm sure you'll have an answer ;-)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/29/2015 10:47:00 PM

Thanks, Cas. I hope Judy likes this. She posted a pic of a handsome man, so I think she was looking for something like this. I'm so glad you liked it! Hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/29/2015 8:41:00 PM

ha! i love the request to "articulate in rhyme just what you need" - now that would be very nice! great poem, eileen! good luck in the contest...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/29/2015 10:58:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. Yes...for me, A rhyme would do it. There is a book out on the five love languages...quality time, touch, words of affirmation, giving gifts, and acts of service. MINE...is touch and words of affirmation. It would work for me!! Hugs, dear. Be over to see you soon!

Richard D Seal

Date: 6/29/2015 6:37:00 PM

Hello my little Desert Orchid, I suspect you're waiting for him to tell you he loves you, if you've got to this point and he has not yet done so, I'd give him up as a bad job lol. Great write for the contest. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/29/2015 11:05:00 PM

Hello, Mr Richard D Seal. BA HUMBUG....Love? What an outdated notion, Mr Seal. The man in this poem has only one thing on his mind...and it isn't love...but another four letter word that starts with l....I'm being silly. Yes, the narrator should provably give him up as a bad job. Some furniture just doesn't come out right under a skilled carpenter's hand and should just be chucked. Thanks for the visit, though. I've missed you heaps!

Tim Smith

Date: 6/29/2015 2:00:00 PM

I can feel you gazing into his eyes not saying a word but allowing your "look" to ash this question...I'm sure he said yes.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/29/2015 11:08:00 PM

Hi Tim...Yes, eyes can so so much. Sometimes even more than words can. Thanks for the lovely visit. That's the thing about poems, they can have their own endings....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2015 1:48:00 PM

ooh la la. THAT's how to do the challenge!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/29/2015 11:09:00 PM

I think it's what Judy is looking for, so here's hoping! :) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/29/2015 12:56:00 PM

I love Paul's comment! You have brought the ooh la la with this one! I suspect Judy will appreciate this one. Is it just me or has the temperature in the soup just raised a few degree?!! Hot as ever my dear!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/30/2015 3:24:00 AM

:) Her Royal Hotness strikes again, eh? ;) Thanks, Richard, for the title and for this lovely comment. I do hope that Judy takes a shine to it. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 6/29/2015 11:44:00 AM

I think that he has already said quite a lot with his look and facial expressions! If you play your cards well, he'll soon be tempted to break his silence:) hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/29/2015 10:42:00 PM

I thought Judy might like this take, but also.......you know me, Paul. What other take would I give it? ;) Thank you for your sweet and kind visit. Congrats on winning in Olive's contest. Haven't read the poem, but I'm sure you came up with something deliciously sweet! Hugs