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Is There Life On Mars

Two Martians went on a blind date
They agreed to meet at half eight
Dressed as harlequins
They looked like two twins
Them meeting was just down to fate

They sat down and ordered some beer
Drank it up and were soon full of cheer
They went to a star
Which wasn’t too far
And agreed Mars had no atmosphere

They decided to visit our earth
Most earthlings gave them a wide berth
A photo was taken
The image is makin’
A fortune - just think of its worth!

Both settled in the US of A
Martians friends came on a holiday
Wearing such clever disguise
They look like regular guys
Area 51 is where they stay

Subject Mars – Joe Maverick
07~05~15

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Carol Eastman July 27, 2015 at 10:12 AM Congrats on a great win. It was a fun read. Jan Allison August 2, 2015 at 4:43 AM Thanks Carol:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy July 27, 2015 at 9:27 AM Jan, if I could, I'd give this one an 8! BRILLIANT! Congrats! Janice Jan Allison July 27, 2015 at 9:48 AM Aww thanks Janice:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 27, 2015 at 1:20 AM Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Jan! Brilliant work! Jan Allison July 27, 2015 at 1:59 AM Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx

Thabang Ngoma July 26, 2015 at 5:03 PM Hi Jan...congrats! Love the x-files on area 51 *******(:heers, Tbang Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 5:06 PM Thanks Thabang I used to love watching the x files:-0 hugs Jan xx

Skat A July 26, 2015 at 4:53 PM Jan Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT** Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 4:56 PM Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx

Earl Schumacker July 26, 2015 at 4:21 PM Hi Jan, Great picture and poem. Yes. There is life on Mars. We are there. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 4:31 PM Thanks for dropping bye Earl:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper July 26, 2015 at 10:58 AM Wonderfully done, I love your imagination a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 10:59 AM Thanks Eve - i need to get round to reading the winning poems but the tour de france final stage is on and i need to cook tea - will do it later lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May July 26, 2015 at 10:11 AM Nicely done Jan...Congrats on a fine win Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 10:13 AM Thanks Joseph I need to get time to congratulate the winners:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley July 26, 2015 at 9:21 AM Ultimately Fabulous Ode x Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 9:26 AM Thanks Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama July 9, 2015 at 7:31 AM This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression. Jan Allison July 9, 2015 at 7:33 AM Thanks for dropping by Funom:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos July 6, 2015 at 5:42 PM ONE WORD SHOULD DO IT! pluperfect Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 5:45 PM Thanks Judy but don't you mean 'poop-perfect' lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser July 6, 2015 at 4:37 PM What a clever and fun set of limericks, Jan! Very fun and entertaining, and well written, too! Hope you will try your creative pen for my first poetry contests, Colloquilisms! :) Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 4:47 PM I will try Laura:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser July 6, 2015 at 2:35 PM Hey Jan, mega thanks for giving me a chuckle this evening, hugs//James xx ~ good luck in Joe's contest, he'll love this :) :) Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 2:53 PM Thanks James - my muse is returning - watch out for more poop poems lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka July 6, 2015 at 1:33 PM Loved this, it was light and humorous, with a bit of pop culture thrown in for good measure. good luck in the contest. ~Janet Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 1:49 PM Thanks Janet:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet July 6, 2015 at 1:05 PM A wonderful trip down fantasy lane, guided by an enthusiastic and spirited heart. Emile. Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 1:08 PM Just a fun write Emile:-) hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman July 6, 2015 at 11:17 AM wow on a roll here Jan, all of them exquisite Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 11:20 AM Aww thanks Harry just a bit of fun for the contest just hope Joe likes them:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 6, 2015 at 10:14 AM Sweet Jan, I hope all is well with you.. long time no talk. :D?! Lovely humor you have always! God bless you always! ~Olive ELoisa =) Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 10:50 AM I have had a tough time Olive it is far from over but i am writing again:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez July 6, 2015 at 9:10 AM :-) Oh...so your mojo is back. Yay! This is good and such a fun write, Jan! hugs! Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 9:36 AM not quite there yet Kim but at least I am writing again lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud July 6, 2015 at 4:16 AM this is soo you, sweet jan-- full of life and wit... i enjoyed this immensely; how original!.. keep on rollin'; the best is yet to come.. huggs! Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 4:18 AM Just went for a fun poem just hope Joe likes the humour in it:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie July 6, 2015 at 2:50 AM G'day Jan... I'm sure some of the people I see around here are from another planet, but then again, they probably think I'm on holidays from Mars. I enjoyed this poem of yours Jan - Lindsay Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 3:48 AM LOL Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2015 at 11:48 PM my gosh, Jan, your meter is improving even more with your limericks. This is quite good. Sure to rate high!! Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 3:47 AM Thanks Andrea - just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France July 5, 2015 at 10:32 PM Jan, very creative and original, fun write for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poems, I love you . . .and Just shadows . . . Jan Allison July 6, 2015 at 3:47 AM Thanks Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx