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Is There Life On Mars

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Two Martians went on a blind date They agreed to meet at half eight Dressed as harlequins They looked like two twins Them meeting was just down to fate They sat down and ordered some beer Drank it up and were soon full of cheer They went to a star Which wasn’t too far And agreed Mars had no atmosphere They decided to visit our earth Most earthlings gave them a wide berth A photo was taken The image is makin’ A fortune - just think of its worth! Both settled in the US of A Martians friends came on a holiday Wearing such clever disguise They look like regular guys Area 51 is where they stay Subject Mars – Joe Maverick 07~05~15

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Carol Eastman

Date: 7/27/2015 10:12:00 AM

Congrats on a great win. It was a fun read.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/2/2015 4:43:00 AM

Thanks Carol:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/27/2015 9:27:00 AM

Jan, if I could, I'd give this one an 8! BRILLIANT! Congrats! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 9:48:00 AM

Aww thanks Janice:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 1:20:00 AM

Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Jan! Brilliant work!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 1:59:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx

Thabang Ngoma

Date: 7/26/2015 5:03:00 PM

Hi Jan...congrats! Love the x-files on area 51 *******(:heers, Tbang

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 5:06:00 PM

Thanks Thabang I used to love watching the x files:-0 hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 4:53:00 PM

Jan Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 4:56:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 7/26/2015 4:21:00 PM

Hi Jan, Great picture and poem. Yes. There is life on Mars. We are there. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 4:31:00 PM

Thanks for dropping bye Earl:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/26/2015 10:58:00 AM

Wonderfully done, I love your imagination a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 10:59:00 AM

Thanks Eve - i need to get round to reading the winning poems but the tour de france final stage is on and i need to cook tea - will do it later lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 7/26/2015 10:11:00 AM

Nicely done Jan...Congrats on a fine win

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 10:13:00 AM

Thanks Joseph I need to get time to congratulate the winners:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/26/2015 9:21:00 AM

Ultimately Fabulous Ode x

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 9:26:00 AM

Thanks Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 7:31:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2015 7:33:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Funom:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 7/6/2015 5:42:00 PM

ONE WORD SHOULD DO IT! pluperfect

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 5:45:00 PM

Thanks Judy but don't you mean 'poop-perfect' lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/6/2015 4:37:00 PM

What a clever and fun set of limericks, Jan! Very fun and entertaining, and well written, too! Hope you will try your creative pen for my first poetry contests, Colloquilisms! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 4:47:00 PM

I will try Laura:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 7/6/2015 2:35:00 PM

Hey Jan, mega thanks for giving me a chuckle this evening, hugs//James xx ~ good luck in Joe's contest, he'll love this :) :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 2:53:00 PM

Thanks James - my muse is returning - watch out for more poop poems lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 7/6/2015 1:33:00 PM

Loved this, it was light and humorous, with a bit of pop culture thrown in for good measure. good luck in the contest. ~Janet

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thanks Janet:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/6/2015 1:05:00 PM

A wonderful trip down fantasy lane, guided by an enthusiastic and spirited heart. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 1:08:00 PM

Just a fun write Emile:-) hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/6/2015 11:17:00 AM

wow on a roll here Jan, all of them exquisite

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 11:20:00 AM

Aww thanks Harry just a bit of fun for the contest just hope Joe likes them:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/6/2015 10:14:00 AM

Sweet Jan, I hope all is well with you.. long time no talk. :D?! Lovely humor you have always! God bless you always! ~Olive ELoisa =)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 10:50:00 AM

I have had a tough time Olive it is far from over but i am writing again:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/6/2015 9:10:00 AM

:-) Oh...so your mojo is back. Yay! This is good and such a fun write, Jan! hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 9:36:00 AM

not quite there yet Kim but at least I am writing again lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2015 4:16:00 AM

this is soo you, sweet jan-- full of life and wit... i enjoyed this immensely; how original!.. keep on rollin'; the best is yet to come.. huggs!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 4:18:00 AM

Just went for a fun poem just hope Joe likes the humour in it:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/6/2015 2:50:00 AM

G'day Jan... I'm sure some of the people I see around here are from another planet, but then again, they probably think I'm on holidays from Mars. I enjoyed this poem of yours Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 3:48:00 AM

LOL Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2015 11:48:00 PM

my gosh, Jan, your meter is improving even more with your limericks. This is quite good. Sure to rate high!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 3:47:00 AM

Thanks Andrea - just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 7/5/2015 10:32:00 PM

Jan, very creative and original, fun write for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poems, I love you . . .and Just shadows . . .

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 3:47:00 AM

Thanks Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx