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Two Martians went on a blind date They agreed to meet at half eight Dressed as harlequins They looked like two twins Them meeting was just down to fate They sat down and ordered some beer Drank it up and were soon full of cheer They went to a star Which wasn’t too far And agreed Mars had no atmosphere They decided to visit our earth Most earthlings gave them a wide berth A photo was taken The image is makin’ A fortune - just think of its worth! Both settled in the US of A Martians friends came on a holiday Wearing such clever disguise They look like regular guys Area 51 is where they stay Subject Mars – Joe Maverick 07~05~15

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Date: 8/1/2015 10:49:00 PM
Who does a limerick string on a Mars theme? A winner like you, that's who! This is the best, Jan.. Congrats on your win!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/2/2015 4:44:00 AM
Part of the poem was for a contest run by Andrea so I simply expanded it for this contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2015 10:12:00 AM
Congrats on a great win. It was a fun read.
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Date: 8/2/2015 4:43:00 AM
Thanks Carol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2015 9:27:00 AM
Jan, if I could, I'd give this one an 8! BRILLIANT! Congrats! Janice
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:48:00 AM
Aww thanks Janice:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/27/2015 1:20:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Jan! Brilliant work!
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/26/2015 5:03:00 PM
Hi Jan...congrats! Love the x-files on area 51 *******(:heers, Tbang
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:06:00 PM
Thanks Thabang I used to love watching the x files:-0 hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2015 4:53:00 PM
Jan Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:56:00 PM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/26/2015 4:21:00 PM
Hi Jan, Great picture and poem. Yes. There is life on Mars. We are there. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:31:00 PM
Thanks for dropping bye Earl:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/26/2015 10:58:00 AM
Wonderfully done, I love your imagination a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2015 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Eve - i need to get round to reading the winning poems but the tour de france final stage is on and i need to cook tea - will do it later lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2015 10:11:00 AM
Nicely done Jan...Congrats on a fine win
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Date: 7/26/2015 10:13:00 AM
Thanks Joseph I need to get time to congratulate the winners:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2015 9:21:00 AM
Ultimately Fabulous Ode x
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Date: 7/26/2015 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/9/2015 7:31:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
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Date: 7/9/2015 7:33:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by Funom:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/6/2015 5:42:00 PM
ONE WORD SHOULD DO IT! pluperfect
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Date: 7/6/2015 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Judy but don't you mean 'poop-perfect' lol :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/6/2015 4:37:00 PM
What a clever and fun set of limericks, Jan! Very fun and entertaining, and well written, too! Hope you will try your creative pen for my first poetry contests, Colloquilisms! :)
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Date: 7/6/2015 4:47:00 PM
I will try Laura:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/6/2015 2:35:00 PM
Hey Jan, mega thanks for giving me a chuckle this evening, hugs//James xx ~ good luck in Joe's contest, he'll love this :) :)
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Date: 7/6/2015 2:53:00 PM
Thanks James - my muse is returning - watch out for more poop poems lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/6/2015 1:33:00 PM
Loved this, it was light and humorous, with a bit of pop culture thrown in for good measure. good luck in the contest. ~Janet
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Janet:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/6/2015 1:05:00 PM
A wonderful trip down fantasy lane, guided by an enthusiastic and spirited heart. Emile.
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:08:00 PM
Just a fun write Emile:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/6/2015 11:17:00 AM
wow on a roll here Jan, all of them exquisite
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Date: 7/6/2015 11:20:00 AM
Aww thanks Harry just a bit of fun for the contest just hope Joe likes them:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/6/2015 10:14:00 AM
Sweet Jan, I hope all is well with you.. long time no talk. :D?! Lovely humor you have always! God bless you always! ~Olive ELoisa =)
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Date: 7/6/2015 10:50:00 AM
I have had a tough time Olive it is far from over but i am writing again:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/6/2015 9:10:00 AM
:-) Oh...so your mojo is back. Yay! This is good and such a fun write, Jan! hugs!
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Date: 7/6/2015 9:36:00 AM
not quite there yet Kim but at least I am writing again lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/6/2015 4:16:00 AM
this is soo you, sweet jan-- full of life and wit... i enjoyed this immensely; how original!.. keep on rollin'; the best is yet to come.. huggs!
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Date: 7/6/2015 4:18:00 AM
Just went for a fun poem just hope Joe likes the humour in it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/6/2015 2:50:00 AM
G'day Jan... I'm sure some of the people I see around here are from another planet, but then again, they probably think I'm on holidays from Mars. I enjoyed this poem of yours Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:48:00 AM
LOL Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/5/2015 11:48:00 PM
my gosh, Jan, your meter is improving even more with your limericks. This is quite good. Sure to rate high!!
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:47:00 AM
Thanks Andrea - just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/5/2015 10:32:00 PM
Jan, very creative and original, fun write for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poems, I love you . . .and Just shadows . . .
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:47:00 AM
Thanks Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx