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Is It Moving Closer

Is that a lion or a large beige rock? Where? In the distance. Up that hill. Don’t POINT! I kind of see it. Is it moving closer? I cannot tell yet. When are you going to be able to? I do not know. Come on! I need to know if it is harmless Or if I am lunch.

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Pratap Roy

Date: 12/11/2019 6:09:00 PM

Enjoyed the read, Caren. God bless you.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 2:34:00 AM

Thank you. This was a fun one for me.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/7/2019 8:02:00 PM

Caren, Your light poem features two of my favorite words..., harmless and lunch. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/8/2019 2:01:00 AM

They are two of my favorite words too!

Ann Foster

Date: 12/6/2019 10:21:00 PM

LOL... I would be wanting to know who could run faster? and do I have my boots or tennis on? lol... I don't have to run fast, just faster than you... or that is a saying I think... too fun. This was a fun write. You have such talent for light moods. Great to read. Ann

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/7/2019 1:56:00 AM

Thank you Ann. Light moods is my "middle name". It is what I try to "think and do" all day long. It helps!