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Is It Me Or Is It You

Is It me.. Or.. It Is You? - Astha Sharma my Words are with You, my Silence is You even when I'm numb, my explanation is You my Wisdom is you, Innocence is You even though I breathe, Being ALIVe is You my failure is You, my triumph is You even when I agree, my argument is You Laughter is You, in despair, my Want, is You even though I’m selfish, my altruism is You my hope is you, determination is You even when I need, what I abstain from is You my Wound is you, my Comfort is You even when I walk ahead, trail that I leave back, is YOU In this selfish world, my share of selfishness is You even in my own Atheism, my Devotion, is You my Promise is you, my Doubt is You even in true commitment, my deception is You When You were there it was You, when You're away, its Only You even though its my Corpse, this shared Soul shall be You my halt is You, my pace is You even when I Accept, my Complain is You my agony is You, my solace is You even in life's noises, my Peace, is with You Going away is You, running back to embrace is You Strange are the Ways of Survival....... even with my Desire, my ultimate Surrender is You !

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Date: 4/15/2017 7:49:00 PM
please write more poetry Astha Ji. Anil Deo
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Date: 4/14/2017 3:32:00 AM
Congrats on your placement on winners LIST with Eve Roper, Sharma Ji. This poem reveals Vedantic Wisdom, including Advaitha and Dwaitha (I read Sanskrit only in transliteration). I can see how even Doubt and Selfishness is Maya, for all is from SOURCE, Brahman, which/who reconciled all opposites in Himself. Mabarak Ho!
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Date: 4/13/2017 11:26:00 PM
Astha, congratulations on your win. I want to thank you for entering my contest. May you have Blessed weekend… ~*
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Date: 4/7/2017 4:57:00 PM
Well, You did a wonderful job with this poem! Welcome to poetrysoup!
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