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Is - Is Not

Tell ya what it is What it's not It's nothing Not something Put away that pile of sticks sanders screw drivers plans It's not some builder's dream It's nothing not something Even thin air is full of something NO! It's out of thin air Not the image in the mirror It's what's not back of you Not clear as a bell It's where the ring has gone It's what you try to finger Yet what you can't put your finger on What happens just before the hammer stroke What happens just after Not the shriek not the laughter What you try to figure What your brain goes white on It's not how you feel making love It's how you feel after Not in the gut But somewhere It's not the instrument It is the thought of sound Not the color But what surrounds It is the quiet before The quiet after Tell ya what It's no thing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/15/2009 5:49:00 PM
I loved this one!!!!! Its like whats in the room at Christmas, if everyone would stop opening presents long enough to listen. You say such deep thoughts and I love it......Love, Aleera
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Date: 2/14/2009 9:06:00 AM
Daver, I really love "It's not the instrument, It is the thought of sound." You have a wonderful gift and play YOUR instrument so well. Happy Valentine's Day, Carolyn
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Date: 2/12/2009 2:09:00 PM
Thought provoking poem. Creative title caught my attention. Nice job! Karen
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Date: 2/9/2009 2:38:00 PM
Awesome write here, Daver ... great play on words that contain more than one powerful message ... we are all No Thing even when we hollar ... I AM ... smile ...
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Date: 2/3/2009 9:25:00 AM
Hi there Daver. Not a "thing" indeed. It IS. I really like "not the instrument it is the thought of sound" - Very cool. You're such a thought provoking writer - And such a GOOD writer. Thank so much for your comments. I truly appreciate them. BTW I'm finishing up my CD, so no poetry writing for me, though I am also in the midst of a songwriting challenge. Gotta put on my thinking cap.
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Date: 2/3/2009 8:43:00 AM
To be or not Daver.Good work here Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words
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Date: 2/2/2009 4:35:00 PM
Life is full of contradictions. And things that make me dizzy...like this poem. Wink. I liked this piece, Daver. Hugs, Donna G.
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Date: 2/1/2009 8:29:00 AM
It is no thing, but it is something! And what the heck is it? ~lol~ Just teasing. Love the places your mind goes and you write it so well. So well that I know exactly what you are saying. You have defined the indefinable. Very cool write! Do you ever feel that sometimes you wish you didn't think so hard, or are you glad you do? Personally, I love these thoughts of yours. And when all is quiet within me, I get them too. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/1/2009 8:04:00 AM
Wow....that is pure love, what love is all about...something you can't put a finger on...it's just there...... Love how you said it. :) Love, Carrie
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