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Irony of the Fallen

"Irony of the Fallen" What good is a sight To soothe sore eyes, When no one's there to see? Something thoughtful, Helpful to say, And not a soul listening to please. Good advice too late to be taken; Not taken into account. Stars in numbers that inspire, But too many to try and count. The helping hand of a leper. An anchor drags down it's ship. A leap of faith as gravity returns. An epiphany in the midst of a death trip. A mute hero when a word could be savior. Homicidal rage with too many spoons. A feared risk taken, just to die in the try. A dying soul's calls mistaken for happy croons. Sweet irony Why our lives' do you seek? The good that's ours is too often taken By your grasping hands to keep. Sweet, sweet irony Hearts you break in two. Then you turn around and make them laugh. What are we to do with you? The sweet, bittersweet irony Yes, the irony of the fallen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/23/2010 11:57:00 AM
this is great and congrats on being featured this poem is very true and i hate irony but i loved this poem! Jo
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Date: 12/29/2009 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Michaela. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week Michaela, Happy New Year >> James,xx
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Date: 12/22/2009 7:41:00 PM
Another honor for this poem. Congratulations on having two poems make it to the finals. Best wishes in the next round. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:40:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:35:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 10/24/2009 2:57:00 PM
So much depth for the reader to think about. Powerful poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 10/24/2009 10:01:00 AM
Absolutely stunning writing here, Michaela !! The first stanza is LOL wonderful and then it just keeps getting more profound all the way to the end! Congratulations on having this featured here at the Soup ... hope you enter it in the next Soup contest!! It is a winner for sure!
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Date: 10/23/2009 10:03:00 AM
Dear Michaela, Thank you for sharing your poetry with us this week. Lainia
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Date: 10/19/2009 3:52:00 PM
LD King: You're very right about the reference to Alanis Morissette's song. To be honest, it was hard not to take more from it. But, I managed to be pretty original! Thanks for all the support guys!
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Date: 10/19/2009 2:23:00 PM
Oh, and I love the nod to Alanis Morissette's 'Irony', or am I reading something into "Homicidal rage with too many spoons"? Regardless...EXCELLENT poem, and so, so true.
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Date: 10/19/2009 2:17:00 PM
Congratulations to you Michaela on your poem being featured this week You've finally gained the recognition that you probably didn't seek If you're like me you wrote your poem because your heart had something to say You thanked us for reading by writing good words, accept thanks in return today
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Date: 10/19/2009 1:49:00 PM
Very powerful poem, Michaela! The beautiful sights, thoughts and words that never truly reach our hearts truly are a "bittersweet irony." If only the anchor did not darag down the ship or the gravity interfere with a leap of faith, life would be filled with far more love and happiness. A masterful poem, far beyond the concepts explored in many poems that merely provide images. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn -- congratulations on being featured this week. (Didn't know 'til after I read this)
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michaela. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2009 4:00:00 PM
Nicely done metaphoric piece. Keep writing. Sara
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