Irish Crimes

An Irish lad
Of seven or so
Bears witness to the hate in his fathers eyes
As the British with guns walked on by
Never knew a soldier who wanted to die
Especially one not seeking battle
Ahhh but if eyes could kill
That Brit be dead dead dead
Poor little boy to see this at all
Fathers breeding hate to the sons

That British lad carrying a gun
That helped him not a lick
As the bomb went off
Nicked them all that day
Ten more Brits in boxes like chocolates
For an Irish feast

A young lad in London
An orphan created by cowardly acts
He longed for revenge
Said one day, I shall make Saint Patrick pay
One day, I shall make me father proud
A paddy bastard I shall stab
And feel might righty proud

Well luck seemed to be full of four leaf clover
For those two lads of hate would meet
Far away and across an ocean 
Where two solitudes already live and breath
In a summer camp of northern adventure
Why they had such times and bonded well
They had no idea of their respective bloody hells

They were boys of dreams beneath it all
Hate had not the chance to fester and swell
So when they returned to their respective colors
They had learned from friendships and love of life
Hate should belong to the fathers
Never the sons


Clarification on:
Hate should belong to the fathers
Never the sons

Hate should belong to no one, I simply meant that we could solve alot in this world if it wasn't passed from generation to generation!!



Notes:

During the conflicts in Belfast a group in Quebec ran summer camps for Irish kids of both Catholic and Protestant areas of Ireland. Much harder for the parents to hate each other when the children bonded and became friends. I am trying to find out what group organized this so if anyone happens to have any information love to hear from them. I know there was a group that did the same in Chicago but haven’t been able to find any info about the group in Quebec.

In Quebec, they often refer to “The two solitudes” meaning the English and the French here, oh the irony  that such a place saw fit to bring another two groups of people together. The world is always full of surprises!!!
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Gregory Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 7:27 AM
i see u have switch the narrative and gave us a beautiful look into the resilience of the human spirit... nice
Vaso Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 10:20 AM
Thanks Weston, glad you enjoyed!
Macfarlane Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 8:58 PM
Powerful thought provoking write, your foot notes are full of truth and insight. Excellent write! Hugs
Vaso Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Thanks Cecilia, glad you liked!!!
Onclaud Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 2:55 PM
sordid tale of rage well told and constructed.. greeat job, arthur.. huggs
Vaso Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Thank you so much Nette, I really appreciate it, as this poem was kinda special for me.
Dunn Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 8:31 AM
This is a harsh tail of an old hatred, a legacy past downwards from generations to generations, it's wrong this is the truth. Nice job here thank you for writing this I enjoyed this very much. and thnks dearest friend for your comments cheri
Vaso Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Thanks Cherl, I will be over soon!
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 8:05 AM
- A sad "legacy" from father to son - or from one generation to the new generation - thanks for a clever history poem - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 9:29 PM
Anne Lise thank you so much, I wish you a nice summer!!!!!!!! Wish one day to visit there!!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:26 PM
yes the world is full of surprises.. :)!!! amazing isn't it?! :) your passion to writing, history and of humanity is shown in each poems I have read.....
Vaso Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 9:26 PM
As shines your beauty and compassion with all your kind words!!!
Timperley Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:11 PM
Wonderful poem Arthur, so sad that the young try to carry a burden that is not theirs. Hate belongs only to the grave and if it please God there it should stay for ever. God Bless. Dave.
Vaso Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 9:24 PM
I couldn't agree more Dave, I should have worked that line into the poem!!!!! Cheers
Eggins Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 11:05 AM
I can only say...Bravo...you have done it justice I wanted more but that's me I am just greedy lol ...love Jayne x
Vaso Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Oh my!!!!! I can do more!!!!! LOL Thanks Jayne for your kind words!!!
Torres Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 10:45 AM
my friend... this is a real poetry... very well crafted... amazingly done w/ passion and grace!!! fabulous write!!! :O)) Keep on penning...
Vaso Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 9:21 PM
Aiyah, thank you so much for such sweet words!!!!!
Lindley Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 8:25 AM
A great write my friend!! My great grandfather was Irish... Hate is the opposite of love, both are serious emotions that must be controlled. We are to hate evil and love our fellow man. Bravooooooo on the fine poem!!!!!!!
Vaso Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 9:19 PM
so true Robert, thanks for your wise words!!! Cheers!
Rodgers Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Well done, an Interesting historical fact brought to life.
Vaso Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 8:53 PM
Thank you very much Dave!
Smith Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 10:06 PM
I live in a large Irish community in Chicago..I will ask some of the oldtimers if they know of this......“May those who love us, love us; and those who don't love us, may God turn their hearts; and if He doesn't turn their hearts, may he turn their ankles so we'll know them by their limping.”
Timperley Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:07 PM
Just love this way of putting across your prayers or thoughts to a great write. God Bless. Dave.
Smith Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 10:29 PM
http://articles.chicagotribune.com/2000-08-02/news/0008020189_1_protestants-northern-ireland-soup-kitchen
Vaso Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 10:16 PM
Thanks Tim, this is some info on the group in your area, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Irish_Children%27s_Fund, Quebec was founded by the Irish, Scots and French, so we have a huge Irish community here as well!
Nance Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Wow. I don't know much about history, or really any culture, or country, I agree though, the hate should not belong to the sons, It should not be breed and let continue, we should all hug and have cookies, thank you for this sugar, a thought provoking piece.
Vaso Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Thank so much Casarah, much appreciated!
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