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Irate Indian!

Indian say white man speak with forked' tongue He took land kill buffalo and my young Great Spirit hear entreaty White man disregards treaty Me think he talk heap of buffalo dung Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Entry for PDs "Indian Giver" Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/27/2010 5:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Bob. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 12/27/2010 6:45:00 AM

Robert, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest with this funny poetry. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/27/2010 5:55:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2010 11:52:00 PM

Congratulations, Bob. I think this was one that deserved a win for sure! LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2010 5:08:00 PM

Congrats Bob my friend on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry luv.. enjoy with luv .. wedding went splendidly and Christmas too..

John Freeman

Date: 12/26/2010 10:25:00 AM

Me think he talk heap of buffalo dung! Me think so also. Smile. White man still is doing so in congress, My Friend. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/26/2010 8:06:00 AM

Congrats on your win Bob.. and thanks for your support re. Miss wong... Hope your hoildays were filled with joy and cheer...your friend Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/26/2010 7:32:00 AM

humor at its finest… KUDOS to your special win in the contest, robert... :) nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2010 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/26/2010 5:29:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Bob

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2010 11:16:00 PM

BOB H., CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2010 5:19:00 PM

Good one, putting it back on the white man, Robert! Great final limerick line! and thanks for your explanation you gave me of the other Indian poem. LUv, Andrea

David Smalling

Date: 12/9/2010 4:04:00 AM

Limerick at its best when it is written on a satiric page .... Robert, again and again well done.

Diane Locksley

Date: 12/7/2010 11:52:00 AM

Me think you make good point, Bob! Hear the grumbling Indians? Ugh. Good luck in contest with entry.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 12/6/2010 5:11:00 AM

Excellent entry, Bob. Great limerick. Good luck. Ralphie

Susan Palli

Date: 12/6/2010 12:35:00 AM

Loved it!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/4/2010 10:02:00 PM

LOL Very funny limerick, Bob!! Me think the Indian is on to something. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2010 1:17:00 PM

Good one..I am glad that I stopped by and read this one..Good luck in the contest...Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/3/2010 11:00:00 PM

A winner in my eyes Bob, thanks for the smiles with your limerick this morning.. Hope your weekend will be a good one ;-) Wilma

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/3/2010 8:33:00 PM

My favorite one that I have read. Surely a winner. Love, Joyce

Suresh Iyer

Date: 12/3/2010 11:16:00 AM

sarcastic eh!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/3/2010 8:31:00 AM

Quite frolicsome, with sarcasm and wit. Good luck in the contest, Bob

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2010 8:36:00 PM

AS always, GOOD ONE!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 4:16:00 PM

hahahahahahahaha.. oh Bob this is hilarious my friend.. good luck in the new contest.. by P.D. .. a sure winner... my entry is "Indian Giver Casanova".. hope u enjoy luv..