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Irate Indian!

Indian say white man speak with forked' tongue

     He took land kill buffalo and my young

          Great Spirit hear entreaty

               White man disregards treaty

                    Me think he talk heap of buffalo dung

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Entry for PDs "Indian Giver" Contest

Copyright © Robert L. Hinshaw | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/27/2010 5:13:00 PM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Bob. Love, Carol Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 12/27/2010 6:45:00 AM Robert, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest with this funny poetry. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:) Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 12/27/2010 5:55:00 AM Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/26/2010 11:52:00 PM Congratulations, Bob. I think this was one that deserved a win for sure! LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/26/2010 5:08:00 PM Congrats Bob my friend on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry luv.. enjoy with luv .. wedding went splendidly and Christmas too.. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 12/26/2010 10:25:00 AM Me think he talk heap of buffalo dung! Me think so also. Smile. White man still is doing so in congress, My Friend. Congratulations, Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 12/26/2010 8:06:00 AM Congrats on your win Bob.. and thanks for your support re. Miss wong... Hope your hoildays were filled with joy and cheer...your friend Michael Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/26/2010 7:32:00 AM humor at its finest… KUDOS to your special win in the contest, robert... :) nette Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/26/2010 5:40:00 AM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/26/2010 5:29:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Bob Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/25/2010 11:16:00 PM BOB H., CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/25/2010 5:19:00 PM Good one, putting it back on the white man, Robert! Great final limerick line! and thanks for your explanation you gave me of the other Indian poem. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

David Smalling Date: 12/9/2010 4:04:00 AM Limerick at its best when it is written on a satiric page .... Robert, again and again well done. Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 12/7/2010 11:52:00 AM Me think you make good point, Bob! Hear the grumbling Indians? Ugh. Good luck in contest with entry. Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 12/6/2010 5:11:00 AM Excellent entry, Bob. Great limerick. Good luck. Ralphie Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 12/6/2010 12:35:00 AM Loved it! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/4/2010 10:02:00 PM LOL Very funny limerick, Bob!! Me think the Indian is on to something. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/4/2010 1:17:00 PM Good one..I am glad that I stopped by and read this one..Good luck in the contest...Sara Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 12/3/2010 11:00:00 PM A winner in my eyes Bob, thanks for the smiles with your limerick this morning.. Hope your weekend will be a good one ;-) Wilma Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 12/3/2010 8:33:00 PM My favorite one that I have read. Surely a winner. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Suresh Iyer Date: 12/3/2010 11:16:00 AM sarcastic eh! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/3/2010 8:31:00 AM Quite frolicsome, with sarcasm and wit. Good luck in the contest, Bob Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/2/2010 8:36:00 PM AS always, GOOD ONE!!! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/2/2010 4:16:00 PM hahahahahahahaha.. oh Bob this is hilarious my friend.. good luck in the new contest.. by P.D. .. a sure winner... my entry is "Indian Giver Casanova".. hope u enjoy luv.. Login to Reply