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"Sitteth Peschiera, fortress fair and strong, To front the Brescians and the Bergamasks, Where round about the bank descendeth lowest. There of necessity must fall whatever In bosom of Benaco cannot stay, And grows a river down through verdant pastures. Soon as the water doth begin to run, No more Benaco is it called, but Mincio, Far as Governo, where it falls in Po." -From: Dante's "Inferno" (the Italian is written in Terza Rima) *** My Castle, strong, its walls so high and thick Small windows with high sills No one comes in, no one leaves, when I am sick and tired of escaping his thrills Far away the green meets the blue, a river as a small ribbon meets the sky I push everything else away, only a sliver remains. Only beauty meets my eye I fight my lonely fight beyond invisible walls Over my head they wet their swords From each sundown till the end of nightfall I can only beat them with my words Words, sharp and strong as ice Words, mild, loving and wise... *** April 12, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 5/8/2017 1:14:00 AM
For sure your words warrant this war... words strong as ice, Words mild loving and wise........ I love this Darren # 7
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Darren White
Date: 5/8/2017 1:21:00 AM
Thank you very much, also for the 7 :)
Date: 4/20/2017 2:37:00 PM
nicely done :)
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Darren White
Date: 4/21/2017 12:28:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/15/2017 2:54:00 PM
Strong as ice <3 I imagine these walls as a good defense and yet I am so glad that you have your words now. They are so effectual.
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Darren White
Date: 4/17/2017 2:07:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend <3
Date: 4/14/2017 2:46:00 PM
“What is to give light must endure burning.” -- Victor Frankl
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Darren White
Date: 4/14/2017 11:41:00 PM
I agree with Frankl, on other aspects as well. Thanks Doug.
Date: 4/13/2017 9:15:00 AM
Wonderful!
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Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 10:12:00 AM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 4/13/2017 8:44:00 AM
I am sensing a theme today... Sometimes we think we can't escape...Look around beauty is everywhere
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Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 10:12:00 AM
Hi Tim :) Yes you are right. I think that writing about that castle helps to slowly tear it down, at least that is the intention of the poem.
Date: 4/13/2017 7:13:00 AM
Words can be weapons or they can be cures...they can create peace or they can create war. Your words create harmony it seems and it sounds so good
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Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 10:10:00 AM
Yes, they create harmony. My castle was a place of fiction that I created when I was small, and I go there when life is hard. My words are slowly replacing that need to run and hide there. So it's a positive poem.
Date: 4/13/2017 5:10:00 AM
If each one of us could find a way of giving back to the world, what we take out of it, then some of the problems at least would be solved. You have found a way through your beautiful poetry. Your words are both loving, wise and strong as ice. This one is a Winner. A7+++
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Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 5:16:00 AM
Thank you, Maria, you are always so generous and kind with your words, and I am happy you love my poetry, also thank you for the 7+++ :)
Date: 4/13/2017 3:52:00 AM
That end couplet is the icing on this gleaming cake! Thank you for a wonderful taste! Stunning, Duir!
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Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 4:16:00 AM
Thanks Budgie, you always encoyrage me so much, Luv you bro :)

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