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INVISIBLE ME Mind in chaos Thoughts scattered Feelings lost In time and place Blinded senses Deafening whispers Muted words Taking me away Lost battle Searching around Helpless screams That no one hears Surrounded by many Saw by no one Crying silently Invisible me… *** February 19, 2017 For the Contest: Invisible Sponsored by: Lewis Raynes

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Date: 3/5/2017 5:39:00 AM
Such a sad little tale... but beautifully told. Well done.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 3/5/2017 5:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot John!!! :)
Date: 2/25/2017 4:40:00 PM
Our minds scream, but no one sees! Great, Claudia!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/25/2017 7:51:00 PM
I'm glad you liked Kim, Thanks!
Date: 2/25/2017 1:33:00 AM
We're here. Wonderful poem my friend, so hauntingly good!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/25/2017 4:27:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend! And I know you are, you always see me! :*
Date: 2/19/2017 10:20:00 PM
Claudia this is so sad and yet is well done. Hugs my friend - I hope you are having fun <3
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/22/2017 5:28:00 PM
Thank you my friend.. yeah, feeling invisible is never a happy place to be - I am having a great time!!! <3 <3 <3
Date: 2/19/2017 7:44:00 PM
That was a good style to do this challenge in. I enjoyed reading it.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/22/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Andrea... I'm really happy you liked it :)
Date: 2/19/2017 11:09:00 AM
Beautifully sad Claudia...hope your vacation washes away these feelings
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/19/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thank you my friend - this comes and goes out of the blue... But nothing better then vacations to rest and feel revigorated :)
Date: 2/19/2017 10:54:00 AM
Feelings of being invisible couldn't have been expressed more poetically. I enjoyed this very much!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/19/2017 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Paulette - I'm glad you liked it :)

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