Invisible Colors



About our first parents,
here’s something beautiful to know
Adam was created perfect,
and from out of him, Eve followed
God said to His Son:
You and I, We are One 
Lets make them like us,
in Our image color them invisible
Give them one rainbow soul,
two spirits with hearts of gold
But the most precious gift of all,
God gave them a skin of faith
So they could live under the Son,
bathing in the bright rays 
of His love, free and unafraid
Using invisible colors,
is how Adam and Eve were body painted
With a faith paintbrush,
their children were meant to be picture perfect sainted
God made us all in His image — 
beautiful invisible colors
God said teach your children this one thing:
to love one another
God said to Adam and Eve:
your children are all sisters and brothers
For I have blessed them, you see,
to look like My Son and Me — 
Pure and holy invisible colors
We were meant to be fruitful and abound,
growing in love for one another
And I will confess right now:
We are One ... everybody connected to each other
And I love you and you and you,
for you are all my sisters and brothers
Looking good in our spiritual skin:
beautiful invisible colors ... 
beautiful invisible colors

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/25/2017 12:39:00 PM
Hello Freddie!! Thanks for your recent comments on a couple of my poems. I'm glad I dropped by to check out "Invisible Colors"!! Beautiful Invisible Colors indeed my good friend!! This is a most fabulous verse for sure. The words, the imagery, the positive message, and the enveloping power and passion of this wondrous poem are extraordinarily expressive in every respect!! A BIG FAVE FROM ME FOR SURE!! Superb Work Freddie!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 9/15/2017 12:50:00 PM
Love the metaphors of colour and the 'paintbrush of faith', that is so cool. Wish everyone believed we are all the same only different. Super!
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Date: 9/12/2017 4:39:00 PM
Enjoyed this truthful message, our first parents had the capacity to produce children of all colours, just like a garden would be so boring if all the flowers were white, diversity is part of the beauty of created life. Reminds me of my Colour of my heart poem similar message, maybe you would like it!
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Date: 9/6/2017 8:07:00 AM
Hello Freddie we are all God's children. I have always believed that. Have a nice day my friend.Peace and Love to you Always.
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Date: 9/4/2017 8:11:00 PM
Amen, Freddie, this is a spiritual matter not a physical one. Like unto Egypt, Rome etc. This is the fallen nature of all natural unregenerate men and woman and the Kingdom of darkness which is at sway in this world. Keeping shinning the light my brother as Jesus said. We are with you this noted point my brother. Amen
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Date: 8/29/2017 9:49:00 AM
Hi Freddie, I thoroughly enjoyed this verse. I resonated with your message as well. If we could only see each other "this" way. Excellent message and this piece is going straight into my favs:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/29/2017 9:38:00 AM
Beautiful and certainly not invisible.
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Date: 8/28/2017 6:18:00 PM
Fantastic verse my friend...a colorful journey of the Divine...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/27/2017 8:31:00 PM
Beautifully and artfully said, my friend, and right as rain ... my parents raised me to be colorblind, and I am so thankful for that, as I have seen bias and racism divide many relationships around me ... love is ALL that matters. GREAT work, Freddie! :-)
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Date: 8/27/2017 2:02:00 PM
Absolutely Freddie. Just perfect from your pen. Well said, so meaningful and true!! A favorite again! :)
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Date: 8/27/2017 1:43:00 PM
and God made everyone equal, beautiful as colors transparent when we see others through loving eyes... a remarkable piece, freddie..huggs
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Date: 8/27/2017 1:01:00 PM
This is great Freddie. If we could all see each other through invisible colors, the world would be at peace. I love the words.
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