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Invisible

Camouflaged and hidden I am unseen, with a soul lost and completely unclean- In a mirage of the forbidden I am obscure without objection, I’ve seen nothing but nothing in a mirror with no reflection- There are no words to escape my fear without rejection. Invisible and concealed when it comes to my revelation- I’ve been gone since the first day of creation. There have been times of day dreams with unsaid things, that fulfill and bring me to view- I’ve been up and down and lost and found and now dormant without visible value. Not obvious and oblivious, inside a life left undone- devious and envious, I hide until kingdom come. Dark inside my instability, out of sight with my inability- veil over my nape, a secret perceptible with invisibility. February 20, 2017

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Date: 2/23/2017 10:39:00 PM
This is excellent, Luloo! I love the style of your writing and must add you to my followed poets...congrats on your placement! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/22/2017 9:55:00 AM
Wonderful. Well done Laura.
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Date: 2/21/2017 9:51:00 PM
Great choice of words Laura!Congrats!
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Date: 2/21/2017 6:47:00 PM
Congrats on your placement
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Date: 2/21/2017 6:26:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, luloo.
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Date: 2/21/2017 3:32:00 AM
Nice one, Luloo:)
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Date: 2/20/2017 11:51:00 PM
Well done LuLoo...
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Date: 2/20/2017 9:54:00 PM
Nice work!
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