Invasive

the bittersweet that grows and starts
clandestine tendrils at my heart
pulling as my grasp decays
on withered vines by
lonely caves

yet I reach for
fetid fruits while
rats in my gaze and guile
chuckle with their
rodent smiles

still wondering how
we chose to be
this victim of insanity
where sand is quick
who struggles most

surely to please
their willing host
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Neumann Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 3:45 AM
Great stuff. Thank you, Kai
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 11:38 PM
I am kicking myself for not thinking of these lines myself; especially this one which is my favorite: "while rats in my gaze and guile chuckle with their rodent smiles" I LOVE THIS!
Cornish Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 11:05 AM
Very kind words from a talented poet
Onclaud Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 3:48 PM
wither slowly we will, craig, but there is that big space where the aces are still to be tossed away... incredible; catch the stars!...huggs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 9:08 AM
a tangible descent into madness, xomo
Wanter Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 1:26 PM
You have captured the essence of growing old, I think. At least I can read it that way and fav it!
Cornish Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 1:59 PM
Thanks Dear SW--very perceptive--a fellow retired scribe perhaps?
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