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Introspection On Toast

There once was a picture that wormed itself into my reverie
On a gray, cloudy morning, whilst it was raining and cold.
In this one picture were four slices of toast and five beverages.
Three glasses held tea the color of honey, and two were raspberry tinted.
Somehow it was important to me that the toast was suspended
In the air above the table by two glasses, like bookends.
For a moment I wondered who had achieved this strange feat, and why;
But then my thoughts turned to how my life was like that toast,
Suspended in air by forces counteracting gravity,
And any moment a passerby might jar the table, destroying the illusion
Of serenity and stability. I've seen people's lives change as quickly.
For the most part, everything seems to go well for them,
Then there is a turning point, after which nothing seems to be right.
Anything can trigger it; the loss of a child or job,
A spouse, or the home in which they have always lived.
Moreover, there is no reasoning to whom it happens;
Just like a careless passerby might bump a table,
And four slices of toast fall to the table, or the ground.

(Poem is written in Prose form)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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B. Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 11:22 PM
Congrats! I love your prose. Not many can write one about the seemingly mundane as something philosophical and relatable.
Leong Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 12:44 PM
i felt a little sad reading that; a bit of hopelessness too. and that last part about the toast falling? made me reflect on my own life. well written! cheers!
Nunez Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 4:54 PM
There is much wisdom in this write. You have seen the message in the picture which is not so obvious to others, this reader included. An inspiring morning read for me. Pleased to learn it won in a contest too. Congratulations, Isaiah. Kim :-)
Richards Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:17 PM
You tackled this photo, and turned it into such great inspiration !! Well done, Isaiah.....and I am so honored that you placed my poem in your Memories of the Sea contest, so high ! Thank you very much...it is a joy to see my name on your winners list ! Thanks again!!
La France Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 6:14 PM
Isaiah, beautifully penned poem for the contest, 7, and congratulations and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your, on the first of may contest, I am honoured
Roper Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on your win a 7
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Congrats on your winning work!!Sara
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May 6, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Isaiah, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Giorgio's "Ekphrasis" poetry contest. Forever *SKAT*
Lea Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Good job, Isaiah. This shows depth and understanding. I feel like I am pulled into your understanding. There is no judgement. This is just the way it is. I do think I agree with Reason about the word "said" on the third line. Thanks for writing this. It was particularly meaningful to me on this particular day.
Haight Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Very nice, Isaiah! Liked your interpretation. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:31 PM
YOu got quite the write out of his challenge, Isaiah. VERy nicely done in the prose form. Congratulations to you.
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May 5, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Isaiah, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 1:12 PM
Enjoyed reading your toast suspended work..Warm toast and jam or jelly is great isn't it..Thanks for the encouraging review of my work..Sara
Kiser Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Well, I had to favorite this one; this seems to have not only, been my year so far, but that of many whom I know, as well. As they say, "the roll of the dice"; we all get snake eyes, at some point.
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April 26, 2015 at 4:29 AM
Excellent ekphrasis, Isaiah. The placement of the toast without visible support (except for the glasses) was a curious feature of the photo. I like the numerical accounting. Might you change "said" in the third line to "one" to include that in your sequence or make reference to the one table underneath? Picky, picky me. Great analogy to one's life.
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