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Intoxicated

I can almost hear the sound of your voice The actual softness and allure calling out I can see your smile as the sun hits your face Witnessing the innocence and beauty of you I can smell you, oh yes, the scent of you The mixture of perfume with your skin I can thereby taste you, the pleasurable flavor Of passion, as want drips from our pores

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/11/2009 5:52:00 AM
Michael I loved this poem especially the ending line - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/11/2009 12:08:00 AM
Pasionate words Michael.Rgds Bian
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Date: 2/10/2009 11:11:00 AM
I would love to hear such words said to me by someone special - Luv it.
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Date: 2/10/2009 9:15:00 AM
Very beautiful writing Michael..digging it.
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Date: 2/10/2009 8:11:00 AM
This is truly a passionate poem..You're a very good writer and I love your poetry :)
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Date: 2/10/2009 5:25:00 AM
very sensual, i can feel the words. most grateful for your comments on my poem from a writer as established as yourself. thank you
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Date: 2/10/2009 5:05:00 AM
wow-- never too early for this
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:45:00 AM
Geez I like this one, so beautiful and descriptive. Great one. Laurie
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