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ever so deeply, these eyes of brown wish to dive into you - into eyes of the deepest blue, to feel love, this love of me loving you, completely . . forever true let me stay in your ocean, the rise and fall of your breathing, kiss you in slow motion - ever so deeply - let me dive into you, into eyes of the deepest blue love me completely, and pull me into you ----- take my breath away in your waves, let me sway let me stay, in your depth ----------------- fall into me, into these hazel eyes let me swim - in your blue . . whisper your love to me, in moments true love me completely, and pull me into you let me stay in your ocean, the rise and fall of your breathing, kiss you in slow motion - ever so deeply - let me dive into you, into eyes of the deepest blue __________________ ~ I melt, in Eyes of Blue ~ Lingering thoughts from the heart Featured Poem- 12/22/2019

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Date: 5/13/2020 2:57:00 PM
A beautiful write Brandy know wonder my song sea of love reminded you of this, thanks for directing to this beauty!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/13/2020 10:44:00 PM
Oh my!! Thank you John for reading this little scribble of mine. Yes, your poem of the sea, reminded me of this poem. You and your thoughts are appreciated. I am smiling. : ) Brandy
Date: 3/12/2020 1:16:00 AM
The eyes can sea... but seriously, this is beautiful.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/12/2020 10:26:00 AM
:) Cute comment. Thank you Lewis. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 1/29/2020 2:31:00 PM
wow... hope this eyes of blue knows just how lucky they are... this made me feel lightheaded and giddy...siiiiigh
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/29/2020 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Robert. Blue eyes melt me, they always have. I don't know why. I am expressing how they make me feel, in this poem. :) Brandy
Date: 12/11/2018 6:27:00 AM
Well I just fell in love, what a GREAT!! poem Brandy!!! Your sounds blend together like a song my friend, amazing1
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/11/2018 10:09:00 AM
Oh my, thank you Bobby. Such a wonderful thing to say. These words do caress the page like a song. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) You and your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/28/2018 10:27:00 AM
Hello Brandy, wow! This poem is so romantic. Have a nice day my friend.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/28/2018 8:39:00 PM
Hi Darlene. Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate your thoughts. I enjoyed creating this lyric poem. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/28/2018 10:08:00 AM
Brandy, as a man with blue eyes, I am enthralled by the romantic way you weave your passion into such a beautiful poem. Oh, the bliss of being loved in this manner. Definitely a fav! Merry Christmas!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/28/2018 8:38:00 PM
Thank you Curtis. :) It is very kind of you to read this poetic whisper and leave your wonderful words. I appreciate your thoughts. Thank you for adding this into your favorites. Merry Christmas to you as well. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/25/2018 12:41:00 AM
A beautiful, sensual poem, written with skill and a true sense of longing to dive into those blue eyes and the blue eyes into your hazel eyes! Loved this poem. Wonderful write. xoxo, Jennifer
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/25/2018 6:56:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. That sweet ache lingers within, the longing is evident around these words of mine. Your thoughts are truly appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/23/2018 10:01:00 PM
How come nobody who writes as wonderfully as you ever wants to swim deep through a brown eyed ocean? I suppose I'm cursed with having to be jealous of the pretty eyed folk as well as the superbly poetic folk, like you. Gorgeous poem. Truly.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/23/2018 10:17:00 PM
I'm sure it's because such thoughts are not written. However- they exist, and linger within. The light touch of brown eyes colliding into each other. :) Oh yes!! Thank you Phillip. I appreciate your kind words and the compliment. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/23/2018 3:45:00 PM
Such a lovely romantic piece Brandy, such great insight and imagery too. Have blessed day, Gordon
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/23/2018 4:05:00 PM
Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your thoughts and all your kind words. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/23/2018 9:12:00 AM
Your beautiful romantic poem can make a brown eyed man's eyes blue...or wish they were...lol Stunning, Brandy :) smiling Love and hugs...Charlie
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Date: 5/13/2020 2:59:00 PM
Like the old song by Crystal Gayle, don't it make my brown eyes blue!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/23/2018 11:15:00 AM
Awe, you make me blush. :) Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you Charlie. I appreciate you and your kindness. I am smiling along with you. Hugs and Love, Brandy
Date: 11/23/2018 6:14:00 AM
Wonderful romantic poem Brandy..
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/23/2018 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your kind words. Many blessings to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/22/2018 4:28:00 PM
er,,, ahhh... speechless, enticed, brandy!...huggs
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/22/2018 5:37:00 PM
Thank you nette. You are so kind. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 11/19/2018 10:37:00 PM
oh this is beautiful and so romantic. Very nice.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/19/2018 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Becca. It's so good hearing from you. I hope you are doing well. I appreciate you and your kindness. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 11/19/2018 8:18:00 PM
Drowning in your words, great write.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/19/2018 9:18:00 PM
Thank you David. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/19/2018 8:39:00 AM
For a moment I was smitten - saved only by my light blue eyes. :) Very nice.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/19/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Gerald. :) And any shade of blue makes me melt. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/19/2018 8:12:00 AM
I concur with every comment made.. simply beautiful!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/19/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Lyric Man. Your thoughts mean so much to me. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/18/2018 8:32:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/18/2018 8:50:00 PM
:) Thank you Philip. I appreciate you stopping by to read this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/18/2018 3:22:00 PM
Wow, that is poetry at its best, so beautiful,,,as well as a reminder of my parents, hazel and blue, and i a product of them both,,,green..to my fav...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/18/2018 5:43:00 PM
Your thoughts humble me. Thank you harry. It's wonderful that this poem reminded you of your parents. :) Makes my heart smile. Green eyes are breathtaking as well. I appreciate you and your kindness. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/18/2018 7:12:00 AM
Now that is love... when someone takes your breath away...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/18/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. Yes, it is love when the breath has been taken away. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy
Date: 11/17/2018 7:05:00 PM
Brandy you are so talented! Words flow out of you like a river flows out of a mountain. I love reading your poems keep it up nice job! ~mike
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/17/2018 8:15:00 PM
Such a wonderful thing to say to me. Thank you Mike. I am just a simple poetess writing from the heart. I appreciate your thoughts. I am smiling. :) Brandy
Date: 11/17/2018 8:20:00 AM
This beautiful rhyming poem is a song of romance, Brandy. Excellent rhythm and tone...alluring lines of longing..and acceptance. A musical.. fit for two loving hearts.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/17/2018 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. With love in the heart, it is easy to write a lyric poem. One that holds words of beauty, romance and passion. I appreciate you and your thoughts. I am wishing that I could place music with these scribbles of mine- photos as well. As always, thank you for being You and for all your kind words. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/17/2018 7:36:00 AM
You express love so beautifully with your words, Brandy. This was a wonderful way to start my day. All my best. John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/17/2018 7:46:00 AM
Thank you John. Words are expressions of the heart. Many emotions indeed. :) Mine tangle beauty and romance, passion too. I appreciate you and your kindness. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/16/2018 8:56:00 PM
I'm into your poetic flow of blue, Brandy...do you have blue eyes?...mine are hazel...lovely verse my friend...keep them coming...love & blue eyes...^WW^
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/16/2018 9:48:00 PM
:) Thank you Winged Warrior. And my eyes are brown- sometimes hazel. I am not sure why, but blue eyes melt me every time. They always have. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Yes!! Love and Eyes of Blue. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/16/2018 8:52:00 PM
ew la la, hot stuff, baby, this evening, hot stuff, baby, tonight. Sizzling and using lovely imagery to do so. My Tim is a blued eyed babe so this was especially good for me. Was it good for you? (couldn't resist) You do passion well, I hope it does you the same (oh, I'm naughty tonight.) All the best ... CayCay
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/16/2018 9:40:00 PM
Oh my!!! It sounds like you are in a very good mood tonight. Feeling a bit sensual are you? :) Perhaps a lot. (Softly blushing). Tim needs to feel your passion. Enjoy your evening of love. Thank you CayCay!! Your thoughts create a breathtaking mood indeed. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/16/2018 6:58:00 PM
Nice structure! Eyes are Windows to the soul. Good luck with your poetry!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/16/2018 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Susannah. Yes, eyes are the window to the soul. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy

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