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Into the Woods

Into the woods she walks wearing a red
hooded plain woolen cape; moving cautiously
as she talks to herself to ease the dreaded
fear she wants to escape.

She hears the crunching of dry leaves mulching
under her feet. A maiden friend she'll meet
on the other end of the woods;
a shortcut to her neighborhood.

She wished she'd brought her fearless dog
in case she got caught by a dangerous wild; 
he would scare whatever was there. 

The ascending sun brought streaks of blue sky
as it peaks casting shadows across the ground.

She follows the path through the woods. A sharp
breeze springs up slicing through the autumn morn.
She freezes drawing a short breath of dread.
The quiet is broken and drowned. Branches
creak and leaves rattle, with the flapping of wings
as frighten birds quickly take flight.

She quickens her steps and made her way to the end.

Left behind, where the wild things are.

1/8/2019

Poetry Contest: Free Verse Style Only 
Sponsored by: Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashley Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 10:21 AM
Eve, you held me in the wonderful suspense of your verses. I’m glad she made it safely to the other end of the woods. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations Eve! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 1:04 AM
You have composed a gorgeous poem, that makes me think of the "wild things". Nice one, Eve. Good luck in the contest.
Cunningham Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:55 AM
When you go into woods on your own every little sound puts you on edge, is it a small animal or is it danger. But seeing a fellow human being takes all the fear away. Well written Eve. Good luck. Tom.
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