Into the Sunset

I have the need to feel free
like I've got nothing to lose,
I just want to get into my
blue convertible and cruise.

I'm growing tired and bored
of this same old abode,
I want to go much further
than just down the road.

I ease my dark sunglasses
down over my brown eyes,
as the summer evening sun
begins setting low in the skies.

My hand grips the steering wheel
and my foot holds the throttle,
as my lips take a long drink
from a cold Coca-Cola bottle.

I reach over and tune my radio
to my favorite rock station,
now I feel like driving through
every state in this nation.

I won't know where I'm going
until I finally get there,
All that I want to do is enjoy
the wind blowing in my hair.

I hold my hand out the window
to feel the air through my fingers,
I wish that I could always be
where the free spirit lingers.

Around the endless curves
my car disappears into shade,
far away in the distance
my bright red tail-lights fade.

I pass by rows of green trees
and a thousand birds on a wire,
the sky blazes a yellow-orange
as if the clouds were on fire.

I could not imagine anything
better to end this perfect day,
than an amazing view of sunset
out on this lonesome highway.

The air is becoming cooler
as the day blurs into night,
I feel so awake and alive
in the sun's fading light.

I keep traveling on down
this lonely two-lane road,
I drive into the sunset
and forget my old abode.




May 8th, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 1:41 AM
flowing golden like the sun kelly your pen smiling beautiful piece dear friend
Deschler Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Thank you so much, Liam. I'm happy that you liked this poem. I really do appreciate your kind words, my dear friend!
Bordner Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 4:25 PM
The need for discovery keeps us close to youth Kelly. " As if the clouds are on fire..." oooohh..I like that visual! J.A.B.
Deschler Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 11:32 PM
Thank you for stopping by, once again, Justin.... We learn something new everyday. And that feeling of discovering new things makes us feel young again, like we are seeing the world for the first time.... I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem.... That was my favorite line too, Justin!
Bovee Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Loved this write, I love roads and travel, and the movement had me feeling it, dynamite!
Deschler Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 10:47 PM
I love being out on the road, too. It's always nice to discover new places, and just get away from it all.... Thank you for the great comments, Jeffrey. I appreciate it so much, and I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem!
Branham Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 1:00 AM
I only intend on positive perspective from the readers point of view and that which may help you reach deeper as the artist you already are. You are very talented and I enjoy reading your work. This poem held me again up until the last stanza - I think you could actually leave off because after building me as the reader up - you take me back to where you wanted to get away from at the start - and you did that well. Maybe take the stanza before the last to affirm your escape.(only a suggestion)
Deschler Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 12:59 AM
Thank you so much for the kind comments, Regina. I appreciate it very much... We do have a similar style of writing, and I think it's a good thing to tell a story with a poem. It does seem to keep the reader's attention more than just a few short lines would.... I will consider making the change to this poem, and maybe take out the 11th stanza.
Branham Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 12:48 AM
Kelly- you and I share similar styles of writing --we tell a story in some of our poetry - l don't know if the writers on poetrysoup critique each others work - I am used to having my poems critiqued by some very knowledgeable poets (sometimes good - sometimes very honest)- I found that I was very grateful for the growth it provoked in my writing. I am not satisfied with just saying, "good poem" and congrats because I feel it contributes nothing to you as a writer. Let me know how to comment
Deschler Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 1:03 AM
Sometimes, the writers do critique each others work here. I don't mind, because I understand about constructive criticism. Some poets like their work to be critiqued, and some may find it offensive. It just depends on the poet. It is probably a good idea to ask them first.
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May 20, 2014 at 11:16 AM
What a beautiful poem you have written here. I fell like joining you, but with my illness I can't. It has been a year that I hardly go out of the house. May your4 wish come true. many blessings... Lucilla
Deschler Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 5:43 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Lucilla. I appreciate it always!.... I wish that you were well enough to join me on this ride, we all need to get out of the house and enjoy being free, once in awhile. But, I think just writing poetry can do the same!
Onclaud Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:38 AM
kelly, a poetic delight.. sensory.!. huge congrats.. huggs
Deschler Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 5:27 PM
Thank you so much for the nice congrats, Nette!
Stephens Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Hi Kelly, Congrats on your fine win. Spot on imagery and a compelling storyline. It drew me in. All the best, Theresa xx
Deschler Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:29 AM
Hi Theresa, thank you for the nice comments and the congrats. I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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May 17, 2014 at 2:17 PM
Dear Kelly, It's amazing what being outdoors can do for our spirits. Thank you for taking me on this ride with you. Loved it! Congratulations on your win! Carolyn
Deschler Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 12:47 PM
You're welcome, dear Carolyn. I'm glad that you enjoyed taking this ride with me.... Thank you so much for your nice comments!
Gibson Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Congratulations!
Deschler Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Thank you, Faye!
A. Sharma Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 5:33 AM
Kelly such a thoughtful vision n a great write ,, congrats on merited win !
Deschler Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 8:10 PM
Thank you for the congrats, once again, Dr. Upma!
Hamilton Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 4:33 AM
Kelly what an adventure super pen ty for your support congrats on win hugs
Deschler Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 7:48 PM
Thank you for the placement, Shadow! I appreciate it so much. I'm happy that you enjoyed this adventure! Hugs :)
Merrill Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 3:03 AM
Nicely done, Kelly. I enjoyed reading this, and thank you for sharing...xxx...mel
Deschler Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 1:19 AM
Thank you for reading what I share, Mel. I appreciate it very much! :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:22 PM
nothing like meeting the sunset with your captivating lines... much enjoyed, kelly.. huggs
Deschler Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 12:53 PM
Thank you so much for the nice comments, Nette. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. That means a lot to me. Hugs :)
May Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 7:15 AM
A beautiful journey...best wishes
Deschler Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 4:26 PM
Thank you, Joseph. I'm happy that you enjoyed the journey!
Guzzi Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 7:12 AM
oh yes I remember too! Thank you, I so enjoy a road trip [don't tell I write poetry on the steering column on any bit of stray paper] Light & Love
Deschler Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 1:07 PM
I know what you mean, Debbie. When the words come to me I have to write them down whenever and wherever I happen to be!.... Thank you so much for the nice comments. I do appreciate it!
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