Into the Night's Dwelling

into the night's dwelling
things are they way they used to be
only more perfect, 
and even if I lean into the dark hall 
there are stars in my eyes, that keep alive the myth
and we are all there in black and white
tho' my mother's lips are glossy red,
her hair is beautifully coifed, just hours from the beauty shop
she is smiling, wearing an apron, cooking something grand
the table is set with flowers, a tidy house, sofa pillows neatly in their proper place  
my daddy sits on the floor with me, playing Chinese checkers, letting me win
and my brother is throwing a ball in the front yard with his friends
things are more perfect
than how they used to be
as the wind drones an old Cole Porter song
into the night's dwelling
where I keep the dream 
from dying



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1/7/14
Inspired by Nette Onclaud's Contest:" Into Night's Dwelling"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 10, 2014 at 12:31 PM
If I could write a poem like you
Chircop Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Why do I always feel goosebumps when I read your beautiful verses..?Awesome you and your mighty pen : )
Kendrick Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 10:29 AM
This expressive and emotive work reads like winning material to me..It really left me with a question at the end so that is good writing..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Soup Mail..Sara
Sirak Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 8:31 AM
What a wonderful dream of past times and simple things. Loved it.
Undertaker Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 4:19 AM
awesome poem Carrie. Happy new year. (: ) Jenish.
Peterson Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 12:20 AM
You have painted pictures with your lovely words. This is very much like a hallway of pictures we have, as well as little shrines here and there, highlighted by a buzz bomb fragment and a lighthouse fashioned from a D-Day artillery shell. Don't these things bring the past to life. You've written about this oh so well.
Tacito Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Spectacular. Letting reflections be the seed to something more tomorrow. Such brilliance...
Manassian Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 7:32 AM
Oh Carrie.....how awesome is this!!!! I saw the scene....your mama....how sweet!!! Your last three lines bringing the truth home powerfully.....Memories never die...
Phookan Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 3:23 AM
All those beautiful images streaming in through that window. It's so lovely, Carrie.. now and again we take a walk down that lane ... and rejoice in the wonderful memories of yore!.. hugs my sweet friend!
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 11:54 PM
wow, this is amazing, dear!!! I too keep the memory of my childhood like you do. We must hold on to those treasures.
Macmillan Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 10:50 PM
:D I so enjoyed the mood you set. Especially the more perfect aspect. Memories ARE tricky things. I think Nette will really love this. Best wishes, chum.
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