Into a Woodland

As  woodland drifts, the clouds hang deep
While birdsong trails with rows of sheep;     
Outlined by duskfall I can see 
How beautiful the night’s marquee…
That in a hush all shadows creep.

When budding flowers fall asleep;
There, moonlight red comes out to peep
On cabins, lakes, and every tree
As woodland drifts.

Then fragrant air begins to sweep
Across horizons…oh to leap;
In criss-crossed threads of potpourri
Revealing autumn’s lustrous spree…
Till dew of morn bequeaths its heap!
As woodland drifts.



10/30/2017
Contest of Janice Canerdy:  Write Me  A Rondeau
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Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Your Rondeau speaks excellence...Wonderful to share the winners’ list with you...Congrats on your placement..Sara
Daniel Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 5:44 AM
Beautiful, Nette, congratulations:)
Inman Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 4:24 AM
A lovely serene poem Nette.
Canerdy Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 12:27 AM
Thank you for entering your GREAT poem in my contest, Nette. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
Thompson Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:16 AM
Wow....just simply wow. This is so beautiful.
Gentile Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 1:28 PM
This was so beautiful, Nette. I especially like " How beautiful the nights marquee!!
Sivey Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Wow Nette, You have outdone yourself with this incredible Rondeau! What a magnificent poem, such that you have written in a most glorious way, one that I envy at all times! What a fabulous piece, Great Work my friend!!
Fleming Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 8:18 PM
A very difficult format to tackle this Rondeau form of poetry I should think...you do it very well, Nette. A marvelous little poem - nicely done! My very warmest regards as always, Nette. :) john
Roper Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Great write, Nette, except you didn't finish your "italics" ....Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 5:12 PM
Well done, nette--beautiful poem--lovely theme--best for a win!
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 4:02 PM
Beautiful to read tonight Nette. Very nice :)
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