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Into a Woodland

As woodland drifts, the clouds hang deep While birdsong trails with rows of sheep; Outlined by duskfall I can see How beautiful the night’s marquee… That in a hush all shadows creep. When budding flowers fall asleep; There, moonlight red comes out to peep On cabins, lakes, and every tree As woodland drifts. Then fragrant air begins to sweep Across horizons…oh to leap; In criss-crossed threads of potpourri Revealing autumn’s lustrous spree… Till dew of morn bequeaths its heap! As woodland drifts. 10/30/2017 Contest of Janice Canerdy: Write Me A Rondeau

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Date: 11/20/2017 11:14:00 AM
Your Rondeau speaks excellence...Wonderful to share the winners’ list with you...Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Date: 11/13/2017 5:44:00 AM
Beautiful, Nette, congratulations:)
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Date: 11/12/2017 4:24:00 AM
A lovely serene poem Nette.
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Date: 11/12/2017 12:27:00 AM
Thank you for entering your GREAT poem in my contest, Nette. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 10/31/2017 6:16:00 AM
Wow....just simply wow. This is so beautiful.
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Date: 10/30/2017 1:28:00 PM
This was so beautiful, Nette. I especially like " How beautiful the nights marquee!!
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Date: 10/30/2017 6:15:00 AM
Wow Nette, You have outdone yourself with this incredible Rondeau! What a magnificent poem, such that you have written in a most glorious way, one that I envy at all times! What a fabulous piece, Great Work my friend!!
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Date: 10/29/2017 8:18:00 PM
A very difficult format to tackle this Rondeau form of poetry I should think...you do it very well, Nette. A marvelous little poem - nicely done! My very warmest regards as always, Nette. :) john
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Date: 10/29/2017 7:55:00 PM
Great write, Nette, except you didn't finish your "italics" ....Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/29/2017 5:12:00 PM
Well done, nette--beautiful poem--lovely theme--best for a win!
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Date: 10/29/2017 4:02:00 PM
Beautiful to read tonight Nette. Very nice :)
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