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Intimate Truth The summer of May 1963 in a small country home full of trees and fields as far as you could see. It was a kiss of warmth that day. We all felt that summer’s rays spray and sway our gay play. I was only twelve running around barefooted with my ten and nine-year-old brothers, as our hound dog chased us with a joyful, excited bark, nipped at our ankles, playing tug of war. Mother stood by the door and yelled out to come in for lunch from not too far. As we ran home, I stepped on a piece of shard glass; in pain, my foot wouldn’t stop bleeding. Mother came out as I hobbled home. She washed and stopped the bleeding, applied antibiotic cream, and bandaged my foot. I learned a big lesson that day. Always wear shoes when I go outside. I still have the scar that reminds me of that day, a lesson learned. 5/9/2023

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Date: 5/20/2023 1:20:00 PM
Hard lessons usually leave scares. Yours was a good lesson, but also a nice memory of your caring mother. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill
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Date: 5/11/2023 8:37:00 AM
You still have the scars to remind you along with precious memories:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/10/2023 6:44:00 PM
I caught my bare foot in the spike of a bicycle! ER before dinner!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/10/2023 8:15:00 PM
ouch! Not a fun ride.
Date: 5/10/2023 6:30:00 AM
- I always loved going barefoot...especially in summer...never learn no matter what happens :))) - A day to remember, Eve....a lovely poem :) - All the best :) - hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/10/2023 9:04:00 AM
Barefoot in the house only for me. Thank you, my friend, for reading... Many Blessings
Date: 5/10/2023 5:36:00 AM
It's really crazy at the things we remember from our youth. It really didn't matter much in those days, we saved our shoes for school and church. Barefoot was the way we lived. LOL I too stepped on glass more han once but usually it was from wading ditches after a rain. Happy Mother's Day, Eve. Your poem brought back a lot of memories for me:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/10/2023 9:05:00 AM
It's funny how the scar is still at the bottom of my foot. Thank you, my friend, for reading... Many Blessings
Date: 5/10/2023 5:36:00 AM
So interesting Eve, to read of one's memory of experiences! We all have them yet they usually remain unspoken! I enjoyed reading yours ( though I am sorry that you cut yourself!) Best of luck in the contest xxoo
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/10/2023 9:07:00 AM
If it wasn't for the many scars to remind me of my past I would forget a lot of my childhood. Thank you, my friend, for reading... Many Blessings
Date: 5/10/2023 12:42:00 AM
That is a lesson learned the hard way. Hugs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/10/2023 9:03:00 AM
Thank you, my friend, for reading... Many Blessings

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