Interwreathe

When the rays of a small campfire ember 
find its way to the depths of passion 
sparking a heat so lustful it’s hard to remember-
A time we didn’t fuse, I lay.

As that ember dies in the moonlit sky
leaving shades of sweat upon the faintly
heard tussles of a trampled ground- 
Hackneyed and abused, I stay.

For the fatigued water lays to salt
after the dew of a sunrise fog
choreographs beauty of love into our own-
We coalesce as one recused, I pray;

“Please don’t let go and I will fill the muddles
of darkness with magical flowing beams 
through zealous tears that absorb the clouds
with hues of reverence both dull and bright”-

And simply refuse to breakaway.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nusker Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 10:41 PM
Passion speaks through this fabulous poem.
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 7:40 AM
many congrats on your win Lukas it is so lovely to read the first poems of poets on soup:-) hugs Jan xx
Ficklin Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Thx Jan... It really is!
Wolf Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Thank you for entering my contest and congrats to you
Ficklin Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 11:33 AM
:)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 9:35 AM
A very passionate first offering! Welcome to the soup.
Devnath  Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 2:25 PM
Very nice your first poem i have read from you. Carry on ahead with true spirit as a nice poetess. Welcome and wish your heartfelt love. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
Ficklin Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Thank you BL! Although I am in touch with my feminine side I do have to correct your gender term.. A poet I am! Your love is always appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 1:18 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Lukas :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 10:03 PM
Lukas, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
A   Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:39 PM
Lukas, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Ficklin Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Wow what a warm welcome!! I like this place already. Stay AWESOME Linda!
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