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No larger than a grain of rice, her face is forming; mouth, a slice. Her heart, a tube, begins to beat; at one month, things are imprecise. An inch now from her head to feet. Eyes, fingers, toes: not yet complete. Her neural tube, well on its way. At two months, things look pretty sweet. Four inches long, an ounce to weigh; miscarriage risk drops every day. All parts are present, there to see; at three months, fingers grasp and splay. Her nails and hair seen easily; eyelid, eyebrow, eyelash agree. Four months now and six inches long, the ultrasound clear: she’s a she. Her muscles build; she’s getting strong. You thought you felt her; you’re not wrong. She’s covered with lanugo hair. At late month five, she hears your song. Her fingerprints? Whorls present there. The eyelids part; eyes open, stare. When she hiccups, you may observe. Month six births: viable with care. Refinements to sensory nerves, reacts to light, from pain will swerve. She rarely is reserved or still; month seven, and this gal’s got verve! At five pounds now, she kicks at will. Lungs immature, but they can fill. Eight months, all sharpens, gets refined; You’re on alert, you know the drill. It’s nine months now; she’s quite confined. Delivered, breathes in, and unwinds. Flesh of your flesh, though quite her own; Distinctly her, you’re intertwined.
Thrilled that this was selected POTD on 05/15/22

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Date: 6/8/2022 3:35:00 PM
i am lost for words....magnificent will have to do...enjoyed this very much
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Date: 5/25/2022 6:17:00 PM
Jeff, I just found this among the Rubaiyat poems. Sorry I missed seeing it while I was ill. It's marvelously created.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/25/2022 6:54:00 PM
Sorry you were ill! I remember you mentioning you hadn’t been posting much. All better now, I hope?
Date: 5/20/2022 5:17:00 AM
I missed seeing this wonderful poem of the development of a fetus from the time of conception to the time of delivery. This formation from a tiny cell to a full grown human is something so amazing and you have beautifully depicted each stage of its growth. Congratulations on your honor of POTD
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/20/2022 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 5/19/2022 6:09:00 PM
OMG! This is one of the most moving and beautiful Rubaiyat poems I have ever read. Straight into my faves! I am so pleased to see it receive POTD! My oldest daughter was blessed with her first and only baby 2 years ago. A little girl. My daughter got pregnant naturally by the will of God at the age of 46. Her baby was born two months prematurely but she survived and is perfectly healthy and adorable I may add. Thank you for this lovely gift of poetry. My belated Congratulations on POTD! Blessings xxoo
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/19/2022 6:44:00 PM
46, wow! My wife was 39 with our last. The development of a child is truly amazing, so glad this one resonated with you, Connie
Date: 5/17/2022 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Jeff! Some may ignore the growth of a human being inside a God-given womb. This little lady’s development before and after birth to be celebrated. You’ve given us a snapshot to be proud of! <3<3<3
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/20/2022 7:19:00 AM
thanks, Kim!
Date: 5/16/2022 11:36:00 PM
Somehow, I missed out on the latest developments, Jeff. Congrats on POTD!! ~ 4th world developing person
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/20/2022 7:19:00 AM
fearfully and wonderfully made!
Date: 5/16/2022 5:15:00 PM
Jeff, these are enticing lines regarding the wondrous development of a fetus in the womb. Beautifully written. The rhyme scheme reminds me of 'Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening' by Robert Frost. I enjoyed the read very much, congrats for your POTD ~ John
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/20/2022 7:19:00 AM
Thanks, John
Date: 5/16/2022 7:09:00 AM
Such a beautiful write on the child growing within the womb, any woman would be awed with this poem, Jeff, congratulations:) a fave for me:)
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Date: 5/15/2022 7:29:00 PM
As a mother of two (a girl and a boy) I know this feeling. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe, especially this : "Flesh of your flesh, you’re intertwined." So true, in every way. Congratulations Jeff, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 5/15/2022 7:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD Jeff. Your outstanding poem is beautiful, I like the rhyme throughout this writing too. Enjoy this honor.
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Date: 5/15/2022 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations Jeff, I am so glad the precious baby made it! Mine were 6 pounds, 19 inches long!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/15/2022 4:42:00 PM
Ha! You got off "easy", says the guy. My poor wife delivered our girls at 10 lb 7 oz and 9 lb 13 oz without c-section or epidural. I'm still in awe!!! Lol, I'm just kidding about the easy!!!! Thanks, Anaya
Date: 5/15/2022 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Jeff! I love how you described each beautiful stage of development. Life is truly a miracle. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 5/15/2022 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your POWERFUL and poignant POTD! You certainly touched on the miracle of life! Kudos! :)Paulette
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Date: 5/15/2022 9:50:00 AM
Jeff, wow, your poem is such a beautiful journey, my niece just gave birth to a baby girl, perfect in every way. And congratulations on receiving a very deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 5/15/2022 9:18:00 AM
Thank you for the beautiful poem on the pathway to life and the intertwining of lives, mother and child. Congratulations on your POTD honor, Jeff, it is well deserved. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/15/2022 7:57:00 AM
I said it all earlier. Back to say congratulations, Jeff, on a well-earned P.O.T.D.
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Date: 5/15/2022 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. An amazing write/story. Love It. Have a blessed day/week writing away..........
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Date: 5/15/2022 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD Jeff! Enjoy :)
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Date: 5/15/2022 6:37:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful in its concept and delivery ! So intricate and magical ! Congratulations on POTD Jeff! Susan :)
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Date: 5/15/2022 5:27:00 AM
Wow! You’ve taken us step by step, month by month from conception to birth. An amazing write, Jeff, congrats on POTD, a fave
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Date: 5/15/2022 5:20:00 AM
The miracle of life unfolds as the months go by, Beautiful write Jeff, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/15/2022 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Jeff. A stunning piece - excellent description of the process and the stages - seems miraculous!
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Date: 5/15/2022 3:54:00 AM
Beautifully done Jeff
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Date: 5/15/2022 3:20:00 AM
Totally lovely Jeff! Congratulations…..Debx
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Date: 5/15/2022 3:10:00 AM
A well written verse from conception to birth, congratulations Jeff on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/15/2022 3:32:00 AM
Thanks, Tom!
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