Intertwined

No larger than a grain of rice, her face is forming; mouth, a slice. Her heart, a tube, begins to beat; at one month, things are imprecise. An inch now from her head to feet. Eyes, fingers, toes: not yet complete. Her neural tube, well on its way. At two months, things look pretty sweet. Four inches long, an ounce to weigh; miscarriage risk drops every day. All parts are present, there to see; at three months, fingers grasp and splay. Her nails and hair seen easily; eyelid, eyebrow, eyelash agree. Four months now and six inches long, the ultrasound clear: she’s a she. Her muscles build; she’s getting strong. You thought you felt her; you’re not wrong. She’s covered with lanugo hair. At late month five, she hears your song. Her fingerprints? Whorls present there. The eyelids part; eyes open, stare. When she hiccups, you may observe. Month six births: viable with care. Refinements to sensory nerves, reacts to light, from pain will swerve. She rarely is reserved or still; month seven, and this gal’s got verve! At five pounds now, she kicks at will. Lungs immature, but they can fill. Eight months, all sharpens, gets refined; You’re on alert, you know the drill. It’s nine months now; she’s quite confined. Delivered, breathes in, and unwinds. Flesh of your flesh, though quite her own; Distinctly her, you’re intertwined.
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La France Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 3:39 AM
Jeff, congratulations on having your poem selected for the Radiant Verses Anthology, so beautifully written, an excellent Rubaiyat poem, your words truly touched my heart, a FAV, blessings Constance
mysore Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 11:38 PM
congratulations dear poet. So happy to read you on 'Radiant Verses' anthology. 'Distinctly her, you're intertwined'.. happy read. Cheers!!!
Ray Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 3:35 PM
i am lost for words....magnificent will have to do...enjoyed this very much
Logan Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 6:17 PM
Jeff, I just found this among the Rubaiyat poems. Sorry I missed seeing it while I was ill. It's marvelously created.
Kyser Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 6:54 PM
Sorry you were ill! I remember you mentioning you hadn’t been posting much. All better now, I hope?
George Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 5:17 AM
I missed seeing this wonderful poem of the development of a fetus from the time of conception to the time of delivery. This formation from a tiny cell to a full grown human is something so amazing and you have beautifully depicted each stage of its growth. Congratulations on your honor of POTD
Kyser Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 6:09 PM
OMG! This is one of the most moving and beautiful Rubaiyat poems I have ever read. Straight into my faves! I am so pleased to see it receive POTD! My oldest daughter was blessed with her first and only baby 2 years ago. A little girl. My daughter got pregnant naturally by the will of God at the age of 46. Her baby was born two months prematurely but she survived and is perfectly healthy and adorable I may add. Thank you for this lovely gift of poetry. My belated Congratulations on POTD! Blessings xxoo
Kyser Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 6:44 PM
46, wow! My wife was 39 with our last. The development of a child is truly amazing, so glad this one resonated with you, Connie
Rodrigues Avatar
May 17, 2022 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Jeff! Some may ignore the growth of a human being inside a God-given womb. This little lady’s development before and after birth to be celebrated. You’ve given us a snapshot to be proud of! <3<3<3
Kyser Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 7:19 AM
thanks, Kim!
Wolf Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 11:36 PM
Somehow, I missed out on the latest developments, Jeff. Congrats on POTD!! ~ 4th world developing person
Kyser Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 7:19 AM
fearfully and wonderfully made!
Watt Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 5:15 PM
Jeff, these are enticing lines regarding the wondrous development of a fetus in the womb. Beautifully written. The rhyme scheme reminds me of 'Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening' by Robert Frost. I enjoyed the read very much, congrats for your POTD ~ John
Kyser Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Thanks, John
Daniel Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 7:09 AM
Such a beautiful write on the child growing within the womb, any woman would be awed with this poem, Jeff, congratulations:) a fave for me:)
Nicole Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 7:29 PM
As a mother of two (a girl and a boy) I know this feeling. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe, especially this : "Flesh of your flesh, you’re intertwined." So true, in every way. Congratulations Jeff, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Poet Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 7:06 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD Jeff. Your outstanding poem is beautiful, I like the rhyme throughout this writing too. Enjoy this honor.
Anaya Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 4:33 PM
Congratulations Jeff, I am so glad the precious baby made it! Mine were 6 pounds, 19 inches long!
Kyser Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 4:42 PM
Ha! You got off "easy", says the guy. My poor wife delivered our girls at 10 lb 7 oz and 9 lb 13 oz without c-section or epidural. I'm still in awe!!! Lol, I'm just kidding about the easy!!!! Thanks, Anaya
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 3:37 PM
Congratulations, Jeff! I love how you described each beautiful stage of development. Life is truly a miracle. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Calasibetta Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 11:52 AM
Congratulations on your POWERFUL and poignant POTD! You certainly touched on the miracle of life! Kudos! :)Paulette
La France Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Jeff, wow, your poem is such a beautiful journey, my niece just gave birth to a baby girl, perfect in every way. And congratulations on receiving a very deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
Baker Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Thank you for the beautiful poem on the pathway to life and the intertwining of lives, mother and child. Congratulations on your POTD honor, Jeff, it is well deserved. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Hankins Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 7:57 AM
I said it all earlier. Back to say congratulations, Jeff, on a well-earned P.O.T.D.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. An amazing write/story. Love It. Have a blessed day/week writing away..........
Sands Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations for POTD Jeff! Enjoy :)
Lawrence Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 6:37 AM
Absolutely beautiful in its concept and delivery ! So intricate and magical ! Congratulations on POTD Jeff! Susan :)
Seeker Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 5:27 AM
Wow! You’ve taken us step by step, month by month from conception to birth. An amazing write, Jeff, congrats on POTD, a fave
May Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 5:20 AM
The miracle of life unfolds as the months go by, Beautiful write Jeff, Congrats on POTD
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 4:59 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Jeff. A stunning piece - excellent description of the process and the stages - seems miraculous!
Lawless Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 3:54 AM
Beautifully done Jeff
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