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Internal Bonfire Among Bitter Breaths

As a misty autumn succumbs to winters harsh chilling grasp. The sky turns bleak and hues of shrouding grey. The ominous days unfold shorter and colder. The remnants of vegetation lie pitifully withered and sparse, as nature rests dead and in the throes of decay. Early morning frost like sprinkled powder smothers a barren land and shards of ice hang from naked trees as fingers of a hand. Dewdrops appear like goosebumps, along a parade of wrinkly naked trees. Bare branches and rooftops seem lifeless, as birds have no desire for frosty serenades. Trampled iced leaves, decay in ashen damp air, as snail-like sluggish humanity adorns its seasonal fleece. Despite winter's scentless bitter breaths, the soul ignites an internal bonfire - radiating a vigilant glow to the surface. Silent One collaboration with Peter Dome. 13 November 2020

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Date: 11/17/2020 8:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/17/2020 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. Hope you are well.What a beautiful part of the world you live in. take good care. Pete.
Date: 11/15/2020 2:20:00 PM
The imagery in this is fabulous! You two work well together! Linda
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Date: 11/15/2020 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Much appreciated. all thanks to Silent one. take good care friend. Love your poetry.
Date: 11/15/2020 10:08:00 AM
I felt the light at the end of the tunnel with your uplifting ending. Winters can be very harsh and cold but hope springs eternal. Not to be corny with cliches, but your collaboration shines a light on contrast with vivid imagery so perfectly blended. This is deserving of your POTD honors! Congratulations to you both. Blessings xxoo
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/15/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie. I'm so grateful to you, and all the lovey poets that have left comments. I feel humbled by your kindness and kind words. take good care. Pete..
Date: 11/15/2020 9:44:00 AM
Ah, Peter and Silent One, such a warm enlightening end to a poem lush with emotion, imagery and metaphoric beauty. I admire how your brilliant title interacts wonderfully with the body of your poem. Your talented pens combined for a great collaboration! Congratulations to you both for your worthy recognition with well-deserved POTD honors.. ~Susan
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/15/2020 10:31:00 AM
hi Susan. so good of you to stop by. The title came from silent one. so glad you enjoyed it. thank you, friend. stay safe.Bless you.Pete.
Date: 11/15/2020 6:18:00 AM
I love this Andrea. A random bucket list that just happens- spontaneous and adventuresome. :) Congratulations on POTD! Linda
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/15/2020 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda.Glad you enjoyed it. it was thanks to Silent on. Take care. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 7:17:00 PM
Peter, congratulations to you and SO on your collaboratiooon for this seasonal, "internal bonfire" POTD.
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/15/2020 1:25:00 AM
Hi Sam. Thank you very much. so glad you enjoyed it. Take good care. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 6:28:00 PM
"The soul ignites an internal bonfire, despite winter's scentless bitter breaths" I love this thought. Nature takes us on a journey through life. You both have expressed the tender moments of Autumn to Winter- so vividly. Congratulations Peter and Silent One, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/15/2020 1:26:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by Brandy and your kind comments. Much appreciated. Stay safe. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations to both of you for your great collaboration and congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 11/15/2020 1:28:00 AM
Hi Hiedi.It wouldn't have happed without Silent one. So happy you enjoyed it. thank you so much. take good care. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 12:59:00 PM
Peter and Silent, what a wonderful collaboration and congratulations Peter on POTD, a FAV for me _Constance
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/15/2020 1:31:00 AM
So good of you to stop by. thank you so much, Constance. Never had so many replies from such lovely talented fellow poets. I am so grateful. Stay safe. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations to both you and solent for your Winter haunting imagery! Enjoyed!
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Date: 11/15/2020 1:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim. So kind. I appreciate you stopping by.Looking forward to reading you. Take good care. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 11:03:00 AM
Yes, as long the heating is warming..Congratulations Peter Dome and Silent One on POTD...it's like the ending of love...a glow
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Date: 11/15/2020 1:35:00 AM
Hi friend. Thank you so much. Much appreciated. Love being wrapped up warm, and walking in autumn or winter, with hazy sunshine. Take good care. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 10:44:00 AM
I see as well that it is chosen for POTD. Congrats!
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Date: 11/14/2020 10:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Richard. it was Silent one who was behind yhis. Take care my friend.
Date: 11/14/2020 10:43:00 AM
Great Collaboration! Two talented poets.
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/14/2020 10:47:00 AM
Thank you once again bro. have a great day.
Date: 11/14/2020 8:10:00 AM
Thank you, everyone. Much appreciated. It was silent one's Idea. I owe it to silent one. Thank you for being vited poem of the day. so thrilled.Take good care. Pete.
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Date: 11/14/2020 6:57:00 AM
WoW! Peter, You and Silent One wrote such a well written collaboration. I enjoy nature writes and this one of the finest one’s I’ve seen. The content and imagery is amazing. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day.It was well deserved my friend:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2020 8:48:00 AM
I’m well my dear friend, I appreciate you asking. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/14/2020 7:53:00 AM
Hi Alexis. How ye doing. I'm flattered by your kind comments. It was Silent one's idea.So glad you enjoyed it. Hope you are well take care. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 6:27:00 AM
Greatly inspired by this beautiful collaboration by both of you Peter Dome and Silent One. Congrats on your POTD. God bless. ~ Ani
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/14/2020 7:54:00 AM
Hi Anitha. Thank you for stopping by with your kind comments. a pleasure to meet you. thank you. Take care.
Date: 11/14/2020 6:21:00 AM
Such a beautiful vision.. I knew I had read this then realized it was the one I'd read from Silent One. Lovely write. I enjoyed so much. God bless you with many more
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Date: 11/14/2020 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Regina.So glad you enjoyed it friend. Silent one's idea.May God bless you too. take good care. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 6:16:00 AM
Congrats Peter on a well deserved poem of the day. Kudos to both on this collaboration.
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/14/2020 7:58:00 AM
Hi Vijay. It was all down to silent one.So glad you enjoyed it. Take good care and thank you.
Date: 11/14/2020 6:14:00 AM
Super happy this got the POTD. Congratulations to you both :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/14/2020 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Akkina. always a pleasure. I'm thrilled. Thank you so much. Means a lot to me. Take good care. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 5:52:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, I'm very happy for you.
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/14/2020 8:01:00 AM
Thank you. It's all thanks to you, my talented friend. I'm thrilled. Take good care. Pete.
Date: 11/14/2020 5:08:00 AM
Well, a potd for you, Peter! How nice to be chosen so that more people can read your talent. Congratulations on a well written collaboration.
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/14/2020 8:03:00 AM
What a lovely thing to say, Jenna. Thank you so much my friend. Thanks to Silent one, I've never had as much attention. Hope you are ok. take care.
Date: 11/14/2020 1:04:00 AM
I can feel the chill in your verse Peter, you and S. collaborate well together. Congratulations to you both on POTD. Enjoy the honour. Tom
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/14/2020 3:55:00 AM
Hi Tom. Coming from the master of the pen. That's a wonderful compliment. Much appreciated my friend.It was all down to silent one. Take care.
Date: 11/13/2020 8:52:00 PM
I’ve read this on Silent’s page and I just read it again here. It’s such a breathtaking piece of art collaborated by two great poets. I just love it!
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/14/2020 3:59:00 AM
Always a real pleasure. thank you so much dear friend. perhaps we could write a poem together sometime. take care. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/13/2020 7:13:00 PM
I saw this over at silent One's page and just had to come and tell you what a wonderul collaboration you did with him. So good to see you here!
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/14/2020 4:00:00 AM
Hi Andrea. So good to hear from you. Hope you are well.A big thank you for your kind words. Take good care. Pete.
Date: 11/13/2020 1:32:00 PM
- Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/13/2020 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.Glad you enjoyed it. take care.X
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