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Imagine, Interlude, Ivory Poetry Contest,sponsored by Constance La France.

The train was my needed escape for a few weeks, and great excursion to buy some new antiques. My store was starting to get a little boring and drab, adding some new items will make it feel fab. I sat quietly making a list of stores to shop, and hoped to make all my favorites stops. Feeling sleepy, it was time for a fresh brewed cup, hoping the caffeine will help warm and wake me up. I reached for the pot as someone bumped my arm, and I spilled hot coffee, burning and causing harm. I then heard a gentleman behind me apologize, as I turned, I saw his deep blue mesmerizing eyes. He said he’s a paramedic and could help me, and is hired part-time by the train company. I agreed and followed him to his private cabin. As he bandaged my arm, he felt bad it happened. I then looked into his eyes and brushed his lips with mine, he did not resist my embrace as we kissed a few times. We then sat at his cabin table laughing, sharing our stories. It felt like we knew each other forever, both at ease. The train soon stopped at my first shop destination, I asked if he would like to join me, with no hesitation. He smiled and agreed as he was able to spend more time, our sweet train interlude led to the day he became mine.

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Date: 10/19/2023 10:05:00 AM
- A wonderful love poem, Tania :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/19/2023 3:52:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you.
Date: 10/19/2023 4:15:00 AM
What a great interlude, a chance meeting, looking into deep blues and forever after! Congratulations, Tania!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/19/2023 3:53:00 PM
Kim, thank you.
Date: 10/18/2023 10:54:00 AM
Tania, a beautiful, romantic poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the image, Constance
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/18/2023 2:55:00 PM
Constance, thank you and thank you for my placement.
Date: 10/18/2023 9:30:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/lovely write. I enjoyed reading this one again. Love your love train picture. Wish I was on it and riding away. Have a blessed/great day writing away.................
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/18/2023 2:55:00 PM
Paula, thank you.
Date: 10/17/2023 1:38:00 PM
A wonderful/lovey write. Great ending.... Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/18/2023 4:01:00 AM
Paula, thank you.
Date: 10/16/2023 5:45:00 PM
An exciting train ride my friend.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/17/2023 4:04:00 AM
Jerry, thank you.
Date: 10/16/2023 10:05:00 AM
His mesmerizing eyes bewitched you, Love was never quicker. Loved the flow of your poem. Great poem. Blessings.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/16/2023 1:59:00 PM
Victor, thank you, hugs.
Date: 10/15/2023 6:18:00 PM
Awww sounds like love at first sight... It happens and you've told your fairy tale romance perfectly.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/16/2023 4:05:00 AM
Lin, thank you, hugs.
Date: 10/15/2023 2:06:00 PM
ooh err Tania this gets as steamy as the train you are on lol. made me smile as we still have wonderful steam trains on our little island:-) love the new avatar too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/16/2023 4:06:00 AM
Jan, thank you, hugs.
Date: 10/15/2023 12:31:00 PM
A lovely story!! Well written.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/16/2023 4:06:00 AM
Jeanette, thank you.

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