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Inspired By the Brave

It took a little while Through blood stained tears, Through mile upon mile; His gut lined shears. My eyes once shined With love so graced; My eyelids lined, My heartbeat raced. But now I see With eyes grown dim, What could not be While lulled by him. His cheap precept. His hollow heart. His tears not wept. His stinky fart.

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Date: 4/30/2024 7:04:00 AM
Oh I love the last line!!! Your overall poem is perfect. Welcome to poetrysoup.
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Date: 4/25/2024 3:48:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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