Insomniac

I cannot sleep, dare not,
for the burdens of another day torment my dreams.
As i drift upon another wave of clouded mindness,
ebbing, slowly upon my bed frame; such solid comfort,
comes a torent of wild believings.
Such fantasies locked only within the subconscious mind,
a sleeping mind, yet no sleep comes.
Such play writes of the soul do not unfold beyond the mind's eye tonight.
Such a mind may be sparked, wired,
Alive with life itself, outside life.
Outside such comfort of my pillowed haven,
where a gentle breeze becomes a scurry of all 
things moveable between these walls.
Where shadows reveal themseleves to an untrained eye;
a tired eye.
So tread not upon the floorboards which stir such rare slumber,
nor evoke my conscience with such equivocal wonderings,
but return once more unto the realms of make-believe,
from whence you came.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 29, 2009 at 5:54 AM
Jenny - welcome to poetry soup - I wish you well with your writing - I enjoyed reading your pieces and look forward to reading more. Best wishes Janette
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November 25, 2009 at 9:04 AM
I enjoy poems about the dream world, it's nice to hear all of the different perspectives on the subject. I have written a few poems about dream myself. This was an excellent read for me. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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