Insight

FLAWLESS? .................OR FLAWED?

He scoffs at those who must wear glasses
When they check his eyes, he always passes
He can read his book when it is very close
And yet can see so far, that he’ll puff and boast
No spec’s for him, NOPE ! He’ll never need 'em
Those perfect eyes, he’s quite proud of them
They say each one is twenty/twenty
His vision exceeds his age group, plenty!
He brags, and spouts that he can see.....
                  his neighbor’s flaws across the street

                      ~

But sadly, what he does not see
What are beautiful things to you and me
He only sees when rain clouds darken
He cannot see that springtime harkens
He cannot see beyond the dark
Where beauty lies among the stars
Or dew upon the morning rose
He'll only see where weeds have grown
When harvest moon is on the hill.....
                    he'll watch TV, then take a pill

The things we see, with eyes, aren’t nearly
      a gift if hearts can’t see them clearly

                ~                           ~




For the "Flaw and Flawless", contest by Skat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 5:16 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Carrie, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 3:55 PM
And this is flawless poetry, my dear. Awesomely rhymed, and that is not even your usual style. HIgh marks from me on this one. LUv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 1:28 PM
ahhh I have yet again found my #1 Light & Love always!
Fraser Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 4:48 AM
Many congratulations Carrie on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
A   Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:29 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) Carrie~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
Johnson Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 6:57 PM
Very nice Carrie. Copngratulations. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.
Calhoun Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 11:25 AM
Hi Carrie - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
Taylor Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Carrie. Nice going. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Carrie
George   Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 8:20 AM
Beautiful! Carrie. Congrat's on your big win. Love, Lainie
Mannan Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Superb.Many congratulations for this top win.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 6:38 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write .. enjoy your top spot with luv..
Radke Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 6:31 AM
This is beautiful, and so honest and true. Congratulations on your winning position in the contest. Most excellent writing. Love, Deb
A  Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 11:54 PM
CARRIE~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
Knop Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Awesome entry, Carrie ! This reminds me of Antoine de Saint-Exupéry's "One only sees well with the heart!" Wish you best of luck in SKAT's contest...Gert
Peranteau Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 2:10 AM
Awesome dear poet ! This write is way up there if'n ya ask me...it's great Carrie ! Have a great day ! much love, james
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:22 PM
geez, an attention -grabbing study in contrast, carrie... splendid stuff for a winning coup! :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:35 PM
wow, an amazing approach to this contest. Way to go, Carrie!!
George   Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Wonderful entry dear Carrie. Good luck. Lainie.
Locksley Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 11:24 AM
He may think he has flawless eyesight, but actually he has tunnel vision and can't interpret what he sees. Enjoyed your entry for Skat's contest and I wish you luck. Best to you, Diane
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 10:52 AM
What a magnificent writer you are Carrie. it is no wonder you are at the head of winners here at Poetrysoup. You simply amaze me everytime I read a poem of yours. I have thought you could never write anything better and oh how wrong I have been. As each poem I read of yours is simply so much better then the last. I wish you the best in S K A T*'s contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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