Insider Dealing (Co-Written With James Fraser)

You say you're open to negotiation
But you're truly guilty by association
Keep on picking the altruistic pocket
Startling victims like a pin in a socket

A level playing field is what we must play
We toil to gain notice, in our working display
Endeavours and efforts are all that we aim
Credence and rewards, in respectable claim

"Unsportsmanlike conduct," calls the referee!
But still you don't listen; no surprise to me
Cronyism hits hard when bad hands are dealt
Have you considered the pain your victims felt?

What do we see when we face the screen
Do we see angels and demons in their daily scene
Or premeditated dealings, a marked disrespect
Behind curtains closed an internal elect

The games you've been playing have gotten my goat
So, pardon me if my comments seem remote
I'll forge on without you, not linger for abuse
Your "hospitable nature" has just been a ruse

The damage is done, the table's been laid
Have we opened the door on this masquerade
Not for today, but for tomorrow as well
For we will have to see, as time will tell

Your true friends you count on only one hand
The same hand you used to plot a scheme so grand
Some folks might tell you to, "Kiss my Keester"
But I'll just leave you with, "Hasta la Vista"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Peranteau Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 5:58 PM
Its a racket Carolyn,...stick to payouts in pennies,..they are less likely to come back,....those who hold their hands out are less likely to hold a bucket out ! Great write you guys !! james
Sweetheart Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 8:47 AM
Powerful and poignant and the last two lines say it all.. love the play on words and u and James certainly create some masterpieces... terrific write... my compliments... poetic artistry... thankxxx for your comments on God is Everything.. I was in Bible school 3 years ... still have 1 to go but so many things need my attention these day... keep on writing and sharing... Linda-Marie, P.S. Sweetheart..
Dvorkis Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 1:43 PM
unsurprisingly the big white elephant in the room turned out to be a fat white republican:)
Dvorkis Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 1:43 PM
In a dog eat dog world deep pockets have the biggest teeth. Can't blame them really, they have to control things, it's that sick need that got them to the top in the first place and no amount of insight will ever open their eyes in any meaningful way. the easiest thing for them to do is to claim innocence, it wasn't their fault, it's a dog eat dog world, they're just fending for themselves and their families. Nothing was ever their fault, it was the LIBERAL MEDIA etc etc etc.
Delacroix Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 1:33 PM
Yes, indeed, down with the masquerade and let's be real for once and spread good tidings. Great quatrain, thought provoking and inspiring to read. Thanks for sharing this work in duo and thank you for your comments on my poem, "Hidden". Love and blessings, Caroline.
Hickman Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 1:26 PM
a fabulously written piece in collaberational talent from you both,only honest people stay honest and take the dealings they are dealt,good or bad,instead of milking the honest for all they can get,great write telling it as it is ,,unfortunately the rich get richer and the poor --poorer,,,,...Blessings to you both..Cecil
Gass Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 9:23 AM
Wow! This is another wonderful collaboration, Carolyn and James! I love the power that is in your voices combind. You have penned your feelings so well and clear throughout this write that has a lot of impact. It is always disappointing to find someones intentions are not true especially when you believe them to be a friend! It can cut so deeply. Excellent work, giuys! Love, Robin
Austin Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 10:24 AM
Carolyn. Read the Cannon Lee poems by Elaine George. Love , daver
George   Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 10:20 AM
NO, CAROLYN, I DIDN'T SEE THAT VIDIO. WISH I HAD OF. LAINIE
George   Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 10:05 AM
It has been going on since the beginning of time. IT IS ALL ABOUT GREED. Great writing from both of you. Love, Lainie
Austin Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Ah yes, deception...but this is the way of our society...sports...business...politics...society...all are based on deception. People like Michael Moore are just spinning their wheels. The surest way to be ignored or condemned is to tell the truth. Love, daver
Jenkins Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 6:52 AM
THAT IS AN AWESOME POEM!
Knop Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 5:22 PM
And this dealing is still going on. Very well written, Carolyn! And thank you for all your comments...Love, Gert
Payne Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 5:39 PM
wow this was really good, it flowed really well, you both did an awesome job! Blessings, ~Michaela~
Becerra Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 7:20 AM
This poem has some of the best flow i have ever seen...good job you two...Angelita
Gumbo Avatar
October 25, 2009 at 10:39 PM
wow! Carolyn! You guys are amazing together! Your words are effortless it seems and just flow perfectly. :) I'm excited to read more my friend!
Loving Iii Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 10:04 AM
i love it! great work! but i found your e playing out in the parking lot. i sure he came from the first line in the last stanza. could you please return him to his rightful position
Sheart Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 8:05 AM
Outstanding poetry. I have to say you and James make a awesome writing duo! Look forward to reading more collaboration from the two of you. Smile. I'm left wondering who inspired this. I read several different meanings into this, very thought provoking indeed you too. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!! Later, Love Light Truth Patty
Kendrick Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 4:11 AM
Hasta La Vista hasten to the view baby. Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 11:41 AM
So true here Car and James,Car yes there are only few real friends,'im blessed to have you as one of them"/unfortunately many people play games..but the few true friends we shall cherish..and i love the last paragraph"Kiss my Keester;)Hasta la vista:)you two are a treasure to keep-Charma
Strand Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 7:40 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments Carolyn.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian
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October 23, 2009 at 2:34 AM
Carolyn and James, Your poem is well written. The sentiment of "unsportsmanlike" like conduct and cronyism reminds me of the history of the Early 20th Century political arena. (Is the time frame right?) Either my head is in the sand. (where I like it to be most of the time) or crony-ism in politics has improved due to media exposures. The last lines are full of emotion. I hope the "Hasta la Vista" isn't real! Hurt feelings, forgiveness, apologies, this too shall pass. Love yous, Dane
Fraser Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 12:58 AM
Carolyn, thank you so much for the opportunity to do another combo write. As we do another, i get more into them each time. I wonder what the next piece will be about, so many topics out there to choose from >> James,xx
Owens Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 7:38 PM
This is so true...enjoyed reading...thanks for the nice comments...Marty
Gorelick Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 7:19 PM
You two! I think you have artfully said what alot of us go to bed thinking about these days. How did things get so mixed up? BG
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