Inside the Looking Glass

The day rises from shadows
of another day 
and now it’s calling.
A neighbor says spring
and another says fall
but now I’m alone.
I look out one window
and see the face
of a woman I loved—
a post says she’s
in a relationship
with someone else.
I look out another
and see a vison of someone
I visited the last two nights
and can still feel her embrace.
It’s October now
and the year is passing.
It will be gone
before I know.
The sun shines
through my window.
Outside
one leaf is green
and another falls
and I recall
a friend who told me
that in each autumn
lies the promise of spring.
As I awaken from my dreams
I take a deep breath.
The day rises from shadows
of another day
and now it’s calling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 1:30 AM
Seasons change. For some, it's sad; for others joyous.
Greenhough Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 8:38 PM
I find this interesting in that the poem begins and ends with the same sentence. It is very innovative. If this person in the poem is sad at losing a woman, yet finds another to commiserate with in a short period of time, then you're not doing too bad.
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 2:39 PM
You are growing melancholic with the season. Lovely, Mike
Sands Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 11:29 AM
I really enjoyed this. Much clarity, as I felt like I was looking out a window. Well done :)
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