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Inside the Looking Glass

The day rises from shadows of another day and now it’s calling. A neighbor says spring and another says fall but now I’m alone. I look out one window and see the face of a woman I loved— a post says she’s in a relationship with someone else. I look out another and see a vison of someone I visited the last two nights and can still feel her embrace. It’s October now and the year is passing. It will be gone before I know. The sun shines through my window. Outside one leaf is green and another falls and I recall a friend who told me that in each autumn lies the promise of spring. As I awaken from my dreams I take a deep breath. The day rises from shadows of another day and now it’s calling.

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Date: 9/30/2024 1:30:00 AM
Seasons change. For some, it's sad; for others joyous.
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Date: 9/29/2024 8:38:00 PM
I find this interesting in that the poem begins and ends with the same sentence. It is very innovative. If this person in the poem is sad at losing a woman, yet finds another to commiserate with in a short period of time, then you're not doing too bad.
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Date: 9/29/2024 2:39:00 PM
You are growing melancholic with the season. Lovely, Mike
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Date: 9/29/2024 11:29:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. Much clarity, as I felt like I was looking out a window. Well done :)
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