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Insanity - Love Ceases

Cracked mirror, looking in with strange, wild eyes Looking back are tender but deranged sighs Openness holds no bars as pain sets in Focused on the mirror’s opposing sin Before me is a demented figure Posing as what I’ll be in the future I shake, as depression comes to the front I try to touch my soul but only grunt I falter, my mind shakes within its ground Don’t know the shimmering lights that’s around My image reels back as if in terror My blank stare hits home, I stare in horror Mirror shatters to thousands of pieces Just now do I hold myself, love ceases Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/7/2014 2:48:00 PM
powerful sonnet, my friend
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Date: 3/7/2014 10:35:00 AM
A powerful one Russell,sometimes things can be funny.I really enjoyed it. Kudos.
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Date: 3/7/2014 9:06:00 AM
such pain radiates from this Russell sadness too, strong pen hugs
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Date: 3/6/2014 9:36:00 PM
Russell, is this a symbol for depression . You really captured a sense of that for me!
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Date: 3/6/2014 6:40:00 AM
I have seen a similar reflection in my own mirror Russell...Wow, You have absolutely NAILED it here! Well done indeed - Tim
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Date: 3/5/2014 9:53:00 PM
You write these sonnet types of poems very well.
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Date: 3/5/2014 7:24:00 PM
This is awesome Russell....reminds me of one of my poems...called shattered pieces..it's scary to be in this place..you captured it very well...don't stay in this insane place.:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Donna Jones
Date: 3/5/2014 7:26:00 PM
Oh and hey..where are your sunglasses???
Date: 3/5/2014 3:42:00 PM
surreal and definitely a beautiful piece awakening my senses with your raw imagery, russell.. this is darn good!.. huggs
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