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Inspired by the criminals of war especially in Ukraine and Russia.

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Insanity

I feel I'm on a razor's edge
twixt madness and sanity,
disturbed derangement,
orderly rationality,
alternating my being, 
a multiple personality stance
not willingly on my part.
Why must we have war on a lovely planet>
The horrible fear is
that I prefer the dark moments
when cruelty surfaces
in my alter ego,
when an invariant being
is hell-bent on destruction.
Then my razor blade flashes
in the dim lights of dark allies,
blood sprouts from some jugular veins,
forming a red oozy river
that covers the smell
of the godforsaken place.’
War is so dreadful.
Then do I become sane
and cry in pain 
for the victims’ deaths.

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La France Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Victor, powerful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge I Words, the quote is thought provoking !
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 1:13 PM
Sad one in so many ways. Let me say congratulations on this being such a wonderful winner. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Romios Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations, Victor. Panagiota
Miller Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 4:15 AM
And yet on it goes; fine words, my friend, congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 1:02 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Victor :) - hugs
Ricci Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Oh Victor. I will not touch this remarkable entry. Your words speak and there is nothing I could ever add. Please allow me to let your words and message stand. This is powerful. Thank you for sharing. Have a beautiful and peaceful night. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)
Poet Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 12:06 PM
Many argue that war is a deeply inhumane and destabilizing force, causing individuals to lose their sanity and live in perpetual fear, while also disrupting the balance of our precious planet. The atrocities of war undoubtedly lead to dread and madness. These profound ideas warrant careful consideration. However, it is important to acknowledge that war has also been a catalyst for progress and innovation throughout history, as evidenced by the remarkable inventions that have emerged in its aftermath.
Anaya Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 10:34 AM
Chaos and layers of crimes can be used to humiliate, intimidate and punish. Victims are primarily women and girls, Victor. "Spoils of war"--Now Russians against Russians! It never ends. The aftermath is devastating inside and out. A poem that needs to be read by all!
Messina Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 3:58 AM
War is enough to drive anyone insane...I can't believe this tragedy is still going on. GREAT poem, my friend.
M  Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 10:44 PM
Oh Victor you depicted the horror and disgust of war so honestly and real! Well written….Debx
George Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 9:21 PM
War is inhuman, drives away sanity, plunges one into eternal fear and shakes the equillibrium of our beautiful planet. The horrors of war drives a man to dread and insanity ! Grear thoughts for reflection, Victor
Buehler Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 2:21 PM
The horror of war is something that rational minds must strive to eliminate through peaceful negotiations. Your brilliant poem is powerful, as are the picture and the quote. Hope your day is nice. :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 2:03 PM
I can feel the emotional turmoil in this one. Good writing. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Unfortunately someone has to do the fighting Victor, otherwise we’d all be in chains, I totally get the duality in your poem, makes one wonder how these guys are expected to switch off and on, PTSD is absolutely rampant in soldiers returning from war, excellently written and unflinching, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:42 AM
To think of men loving war is a sad affair…sad to have to kill at all. Most of us hope never to do so. Good write, my friend!
Roper Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Wonderful write on how the solider would feel among the gruesome actions. So, heartbreaking for not only the solider , but the family at home worried to death.
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:10 AM
- There is no sense in war - The war between Ukraine and Russia should never have started... most understood what would come from Russia's "powerful men"... but no one was brave enough to stop it - An excellet write, Victor - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Victor, your impeccable use of vivid imagery and carefully selected vocabulary consistently captivates the reader, adding yet another layer of beauty to your already exquisite poem. Your portrayal of a troubled mind is masterfully conveyed, truly capturing the intricate workings of a criminal psyche.
Pandit Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 5:21 AM
War does gruesome things to human minds-- and men become hunters. Sad but true in this world dedicated to wars.
Seeker Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 3:50 AM
This is truly how a criminal mind works! Relevant for war and strife too. Superbly penned, Victor!
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