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Just a little scribble...

So many words lost in my soul. Yearning to bleed, but the ink is shy. It does not want to make you cry.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 11:17:00 AM

How did I ever miss a short poem of yours. Love it.

Jcb Brul

Date: 12/17/2023 7:59:00 AM

I love the simple brevity of this sublime piece...A fave.

Paige Hind

Date: 12/3/2023 6:26:00 PM

This is quite beautiful. "The ink shy" I actually understand that.

Tom Woody

Date: 12/3/2023 2:23:00 PM

And yet you wrote Rekha. You really are trying to make us cry big guy

Bill Baker

Date: 12/3/2023 9:50:00 AM

A dynamic verse that reveals the caring side of your poetry, my friend. The photo is an amazing way to display these choice words. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Deb M

Date: 12/3/2023 6:49:00 AM

Awww SO….simple words with such a powerful punch and mighty meaning! My type of poetry!! Love this…Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/3/2023 5:10:00 AM

I love this, Silent One..'the ink is shy' is true for poets and writers. We think about the consequences of our words and hesitate before mindfully committing them to paper. You have such an ability to write magnificent poetry in either short or long forms and all the varieties. I'm amazed at your poetic gifts. Have a splendid day, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 12/3/2023 4:19:00 AM

Definitely your words make us all cry sometimes, so i understand why your ink is shy hah. Whenever someone says ink i always feel like they are talking about me in poems. Silly me. I love this short but soul hitting verse that truly conveys so much in an effortless manner. Your words be it short or long i always am in awe whenever i read, another one of your amazing poems. Is this for the contest? If so, goodluck

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/3/2023 3:32:00 AM

A simple message, but so profound. It can be a difficult task to pull the words out from their hiding place and get them to shine.

Ayesha Iqbal

Date: 12/3/2023 1:47:00 AM

Precise and profound!! You nailed it brother... best of luck for the contest!