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Ingles of Georgia

Shopping down the isles of produce, my mind began to wonder The banana says to the pear "Hey cutie, can I peel you later?" Pear replies, "Not unless you want to be bruised, loser!" The avacodo states, "Senor do not hassle the pretty lady. Si. We do not want any trouble" I have traveled many miles to come to this wealthy nation. I am wanting freedom and the american dream. Not war any day!" Banana states, "Pardon senor, I too have traveled many miles to find my destiny!"

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Date: 8/19/2010 5:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your clever take on this contest!
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:28:00 PM
Congrats on this clevedr one, Doris. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations Doris on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Grocery Grammar ". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 6:26:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Doris
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Date: 8/10/2010 5:18:00 PM
Funny Doris, Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:34:00 PM
Congrats Doris on your success in my "Grocery Grammar" contest with this super write ...and thankxxx for always supporting my contest endeavors..with luv..
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:09:00 PM
Ha, ha you have a good sense of humour!
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Date: 8/9/2010 4:43:00 PM
well, that is an awesome title you gave this one. hahaha. It's happening even in the produce section. heehee. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/9/2010 2:16:00 PM
I hear the banana came over in a bunch, then turned up in a kid's lunch. Hey, Senora Culverhouse, thees poem esta muy bueno y yo tengo hambre. You can see why I nearly flunked Spanish. El viejo, Dave
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:55:00 AM
Funny write and nice conversation, Doris! Enjoyed the read this late afternoon! All the best!...Gert
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:51:00 AM
Great one, my child..Winners' circle for sure,..Good luck..I hope that none say this is fruity prejudice...Mom
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:57:00 AM
A nice conversational write, Doris. Good luck
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Date: 8/8/2010 10:55:00 PM
Smile ~ You made me laugh dear and, this is soo very lovely and light-hearted it seems, but a reflection of the precious lady whom penned its pretty verse ~ Also, "Dear Gifted & Precious Doris Culverhouse," I want to "Thank You" to stopping by the other day, I appreciate Your kindess dear!!! ~ "Lovely Poem Here" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Yours," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening Dear;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:58:00 PM
Oh I was going to say, but you need 8 lines but I see you're still working on it, Starting out great. Mine is in. Safeway--Washington thanks for your comments on my acrostic. Love, Joyce
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