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Infinite Universe

Infinite Universe Constellations in patterned sequence glisten above a slumbering horizon, rough cut diamonds, glowing facets of nightscape sparkles, as I sit silently peering upon these flickering destinies neath shadowed trees slow dancing to a gentle breeze’s melody I watch as my thoughts escape, enchanted visions floating like luminescent butterflies ascending to each precious star, carrying my unending love upon moonlit wings embellishing an evening sky of wonder in fluttered phrases expressing... my infinite universe is you, a perpetual existence breathing between silhouettes of heart shaped heavens and desires glittering in celestial dreams, for each wish I cast upon this radiant sky is that you truly love me…too Good night Soupers Have a great weekend See you on Monday

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Date: 4/10/2017 2:12:00 PM
This poem is stellar bombatta, Chris! Man you really flex your creative chops on this one. Love the butterfly metaphors ... moonlit wings embellishing an evening sky of wonder in fluttered phrases expressing ... Picture perfect poetry. Love this masterpiece. Much love and respect.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 4:13:00 PM
I must admit, that is my first "stellar bombatta" ever. :) Thank my friend for always being o supportive of my work.
Date: 4/10/2017 10:33:00 AM
Glowing facets of nightscape sparkles, flickering destinies, luminescent butterflies, you hit this one out of the park with your word selections, just WOW a definite 7 and a fave. One of your very best in my humble opinion, I love poetry about the starry skies.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 2:01:00 PM
Thanks so very much John for you encouraging and kind comments on my poem. I really appreciate your visits my friend.
Date: 4/10/2017 10:33:00 AM
Forgot the seven and fave.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 2:01:00 PM
Thank you again.
Date: 4/8/2017 2:37:00 PM
Your words fall gently from the page and collect within our hearts, we give in to their magic, and enter into your dream with love as our guide and your words to lure us in. Emile. #7
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so very much Emile for this beautiful comment about my poem.
Date: 4/8/2017 2:34:00 PM
Dear Chris. It is your writing that is a precious star. Your words thoughts and imagery are all beautiful. Honestly. Have a wonderful weekend. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent. Well done entirely.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lisa for your always kind words to me. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 4/8/2017 6:32:00 AM
The beauty of the universe captured by your inspiration shows the grandeur of creation dear Chris! A 7!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much Demetrios
Date: 4/8/2017 12:49:00 AM
I hope you have a good and sunny weekend my friend, enjoy your free time.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thanks so much Darren. It was a beautiful weekend
Date: 4/7/2017 10:06:00 PM
Simply stunning mate! Always a pleasure to find you here, Chris! 7+
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 4/7/2017 9:21:00 PM
Chris, your poetry is as addictive as Yiruma's music :) Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 8:38:00 AM
What a wonderful compliment. Thank you so very much Anne Marie
Date: 4/7/2017 7:53:00 PM
So romantic and dreamy <3 Love this poem Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sara.
Date: 4/7/2017 6:02:00 PM
Beautiful Love poem Chris...Goodnight.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

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