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Inexplicable forward projection

ok, what is my air You are my air Who is you I don't know who is you And breezes breeze And I stand And knowing is known As I stand Until I don't Or maybe won't But here and there In these moments You are my air

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Date: 11/24/2024 1:58:00 AM
every word inhaled, air, such a lovely thing to let in, :)
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Date: 11/24/2024 2:40:00 AM
Thank you Rose :)
Date: 11/23/2024 9:10:00 PM
I like your thoughts. Need for air is natural. I feel this could be called a nature poem.
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Date: 11/24/2024 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Hilda, I was reflecting on the buoyancy given from interactions with loving friends. The tranquility of feeling untroubled.

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