Eileen Manassian Poet Free verse

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Indulgent Love

Like melted chocolate,
words dripping
from his velvety tongue
rippled to her heart;
she tasted their rich flavor,
inhaled the aroma,
succumbing to
emotional intoxication.
She craved for more...
Seduced by luxuriant words,
her defenses weakened,
overpowered
by an irresistible urge
to bathe in love’s indulgence.
 
Opulent pleasures
caressed her thoughts.
Each syllable drew a sigh. 
Her wish: to be sated
His unspoken promise: to fill her
with abandon – to thrill her.
She no longer dared
inhibit the demands
her soul was making;
this was hers for the taking.
Warning signs: DENIED! 
She tasted the sweetness
gratifying her cravings
in his indulgent love.

A Collaboration between Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian

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Eve Roper May 9, 2017 at 7:21 PM I have never seen chocolate so suductive? well done:-)

Richard Lamoureux November 14, 2016 at 7:50 AM I thought I would indulge in some creative wordplay. Hugs Rick

Paul Callus May 10, 2016 at 5:27 PM Hi Eileen:) Stopping by to thank you for being such a wonderful collaborator ... and to read the lovely comments posted here. Each of them deserve some chocolate as a treat:) hugs // paul

Funom Makama May 9, 2016 at 12:46 PM Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.

Joseph May May 2, 2016 at 11:26 PM Beautiful collaboration you two....enjoyed

Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2016 at 7:30 AM You and Paul definately brought out the ooey gooey goodness in this one Eileen. Hugs Rick. 7 all the way. Eileen Manassian May 2, 2016 at 8:19 AM You honor us with your comment. Paul always knows when I need encouragement. He gives me prompts right up my lane...I'm grateful to him. Thanks for the visit. Hugs

Lewis Raynes May 1, 2016 at 9:21 PM a beautiful write you guys, so mega seductive and tasteful Eileen, :) Eileen Manassian May 2, 2016 at 12:21 AM Thanks, Lewis. I enjoy writing on this theme. Paul is well aware of that and has written 5 other collabs with me that all revolve around love, romance, and passion. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Lin Lane May 1, 2016 at 6:13 PM I must give you the same credit that I left on Paul's post. Eileen, your joint writing is a beautiful and tasteful seduction in each line. Eileen Manassian May 2, 2016 at 12:25 AM Lin Lane, your opinion of the content and nature of my writes is very important to me. You are a woman of faith, and if you can give your blessing on a write...I feel I haven't crossed any lines. I hope that you believe the sincerity of my words on this. :) I appreciate your post...and your kindness. Hugs, dear.

Casarah Nance May 1, 2016 at 2:07 PM What a wonderful collaboration, you both know how to get the tastebuds dripping and the soul speaking an irresistible language. Well done ;) Eileen Manassian May 2, 2016 at 12:25 AM What poetic post, Cas. :) I'm beaming with your praise. Thank you, dear.

CayCay Godwin May 1, 2016 at 1:24 PM I could easily get in the gutter after reading such heat and then seeing: Collaboration between ... . I don't know if you follow, but I've had my grin. Heat it is and I hope everyone has experienced what y'all did such a great job delivering in the fine, sensual poem that has truly woken my sensual memories ... CayCay (read "Unbound" - third down) good to be here and I look forward to returning with more time to spend with your work. Hope you are golden Eileen Manassian May 2, 2016 at 12:26 AM ;) You are teasing, dear. I get it.....I will be by to read Unbound. Sounds absolutely enchanting. Thanks, CayCay. I'm glad you've passed by to visit...and that you found this to your liking. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2016 at 12:04 PM - ..... once tasted ..... wanting more .... :) - Sensual and beautiful Eileen & Paul - hugs // Sun :) - Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian May 2, 2016 at 12:30 AM This kind of love....is one to be relished, my dear. I'm glad we could write about a love that is indulgent, and thus, irresistible. You bring warmth...once again. Hugs

Tim Smith May 1, 2016 at 11:52 AM This brought a smile to face...what a sensual write done so tastefully...Love it you two...a fave Eileen Manassian May 2, 2016 at 12:26 AM Thanks, Tim. This is our sixth collab, I believe. Do visit it on his page when he posts. I like how it turned out. Paul knows just want prompts to give me...Words...chocolate...love...passion. Where can that go wrong? Hugs :)