Indulgence

I shall indulge in a glorious decadence,
caressing the softness of your bronze skin.
Luxuriating in your coconut scented splendor,
as I gorge on the succulence of your bounty.

Caressing the softness of your bronze skin,
it is impossible to imagine a greater pleasure.
As I gorge on the succulence of your bounty,
my mouth craves to know you completely....

It is impossible to imagine a greater pleasure,
Consummate  with me our boundless passion!
My mouth craves to know you completely,
let our bodies be instruments of true loves expression.

Consummate with me our boundless passion,
leaving not a single desire unexpressed.
Let our bodies be instruments true loves expression,
only then can we truly be transformed.

Leaving not a single desire unexpressed,
luxuriating in your coconut scented splendor.
Only then can we truly be transformed.
We shall indulge in a glorious decadence!

Written February 4th 2015

For Shadow's indulgence Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/18/2015 9:45:00 PM
WOW, you did not skip a heartbeat on this win... Congratulations. LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:47:00 PM
Richard, CONGRATULATIONS, in Shadow's indulgence contest! -LUV- SKAT
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:42:00 PM
Lovely and beautiful piece,Richard...Congrats on your superb win,dear friend...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thankyou my friend.
Date: 2/11/2015 8:33:00 PM
So passionate and beautifully written, Richard. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2015 9:50:00 PM
Thanks Sandra.
Date: 2/11/2015 2:29:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 4:10:00 PM
Thanks and hugs back to you.
Date: 2/11/2015 12:49:00 PM
Interesting form; nicely done. Congrats
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 4:10:00 PM
Thanks Mark;0)
Date: 2/11/2015 10:31:00 AM
Richard, an indulgence expressed well in the Pantoum form. Thanx for liking my ideas also. Congrats. Mohan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 10:39:00 AM
Thanks Mohan
Date: 2/11/2015 9:54:00 AM
Congrats Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 10:23:00 AM
Thanks Rajat!
Date: 2/11/2015 9:53:00 AM
Wonder how cud I miss such a passionate write Richard !! Perfect pen !! Congrats on first place win my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Upma.
Date: 2/11/2015 9:41:00 AM
Congratulaions on this beautiful poem, I asume dedicated to your wife, if it is, I bet it put a big smile on her face. 7 Blessings dear friend Eve
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 10:25:00 AM
She is the source and realization of all my passion. Thanks for the visit and 7 Eve.
Date: 2/11/2015 9:01:00 AM
Where have you been all my life? lol. Just wonderful and a big congrats. Barbara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 9:27:00 AM
;0). Thanks Barbara!
Date: 2/11/2015 8:15:00 AM
Happy to see this poem at the top... congrats Richard on your deserving win.. nad!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Nadiya.
Date: 2/11/2015 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win, Richard. Can't tell you how proud I am of you! See...you will the day with passion. :) Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 7:40:00 AM
Thanks hugs back to you.
Date: 2/11/2015 5:17:00 AM
a true man's idea of indulgence Rick very fine pen congrats on placing 1st hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 7:41:00 AM
I am pleased you chose my indulgence.
Date: 2/7/2015 2:32:00 PM
Another 7 Richard... Enjoyed... Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2015 2:37:00 PM
Thanks Verlena, I took inspiration from life .
Date: 2/6/2015 6:45:00 PM
And it is writes like this that put you on my heartbreakers list, wow your passion is incredible, your words take my breath away! Love this!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2015 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Casarah you are sweet. You might enjoy my latest piece just in time for Valentines day!
Date: 2/5/2015 3:46:00 PM
That was an incredible sensory experience! Beautiful and heart felt.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2015 8:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Paul, I appreciate the visit and the 7.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thanks M.L. :0)
Date: 2/5/2015 2:35:00 PM
Very beautiful, Richard; you make good use of this melodious form, and the sensual feel is very evident. #7 // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2015 9:00:00 AM
Oops my comment to you jumped up to M.L.
Date: 2/5/2015 7:24:00 AM
- Richard, beautifully written !!! - I wish you best of luck in the contest! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2015 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise!
Date: 2/5/2015 4:52:00 AM
coconut scented..oh a very common smell in India,I love Coconuts raw or in pastries. Love..rajat
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2015 7:20:00 AM
I love Chinese coconut buns, yum!
Date: 2/5/2015 4:50:00 AM
Richard, your poem is verrrry sexy and I like the use of this form Pantoum, well done and best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry and yes Richard it is part of my life and the reason for my broken wings ~~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2015 7:19:00 AM
I haven't written in this form for a very long time, I'm pleased you like it. I'm sorry you wrote from actual experience, God cares for the sparrows, how much more does he care for you? Allow Him to heal your broken wings and heart. You are one who is meant to fly. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/5/2015 4:35:00 AM
I like the form you have used Richard.. a very passionate write... 'Leaving not a single desire unexpressed Luxuriating in your coconut scented splendor'... beautiful lines... good luck, nad!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2015 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Nadiya for the thoughtful visit.
Date: 2/5/2015 4:16:00 AM
ummmmmm....yes, well....Ahhhhhh...ahem....OH LA LA...LA LA LA LA LA LA!!! OH LA LA...LA LA LA LA LA LA! I think I've said enough. Good luck in the contest. It's good to read your passionate writes again, Richard. Lovely.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2015 7:09:00 AM
You make me smile Eileen. This one took a lot of adjusting to get it to a point where I felt happy with it. Hugs Eileen. ;0)
Date: 2/5/2015 2:14:00 AM
Oh Richard so sensual a write - I relate this to our British 'Bounty' bars - I adore the plain chocolate ones lol - but I guess it could have an alternative meaning too:-) good luck in the contest:-) a 7 from em:-) hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2015 7:12:00 AM
I call my sweetie my little coconut, I just love that scent. Thanks Jan I appreciate the luck the vist the hug and the seven.
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