Richard Lamoureux Poet Pantoum

Indulgence

I shall indulge in a glorious decadence,
caressing the softness of your bronze skin.
Luxuriating in your coconut scented splendor,
as I gorge on the succulence of your bounty.

Caressing the softness of your bronze skin,
it is impossible to imagine a greater pleasure.
As I gorge on the succulence of your bounty,
my mouth craves to know you completely....

It is impossible to imagine a greater pleasure,
Consummate  with me our boundless passion!
My mouth craves to know you completely,
let our bodies be instruments of true loves expression.

Consummate with me our boundless passion,
leaving not a single desire unexpressed.
Let our bodies be instruments true loves expression,
only then can we truly be transformed.

Leaving not a single desire unexpressed,
luxuriating in your coconut scented splendor.
Only then can we truly be transformed.
We shall indulge in a glorious decadence!

Written February 4th 2015

For Shadow's indulgence Contest

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Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2015 at 9:45 PM WOW, you did not skip a heartbeat on this win... Congratulations. LINDA

Skat A February 15, 2015 at 11:47 PM Richard, CONGRATULATIONS, in Shadow's indulgence contest! -LUV- SKAT

Olusegun Arowolo February 14, 2015 at 12:42 PM Lovely and beautiful piece,Richard...Congrats on your superb win,dear friend... Richard Lamoureux February 19, 2015 at 9:11 AM Thankyou my friend.

Sandra Haight February 11, 2015 at 8:33 PM So passionate and beautifully written, Richard. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra Richard Lamoureux February 13, 2015 at 9:50 PM Thanks Sandra.

Jan Allison February 11, 2015 at 2:29 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 4:10 PM Thanks and hugs back to you.

Mark J. Halliday February 11, 2015 at 12:49 PM Interesting form; nicely done. Congrats Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 4:10 PM Thanks Mark;0)

Mohan Chutani February 11, 2015 at 10:31 AM Richard, an indulgence expressed well in the Pantoum form. Thanx for liking my ideas also. Congrats. Mohan Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 10:39 AM Thanks Mohan

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 11, 2015 at 9:54 AM Congrats Richard Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 10:23 AM Thanks Rajat!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 11, 2015 at 9:53 AM Wonder how cud I miss such a passionate write Richard !! Perfect pen !! Congrats on first place win my friend! Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 10:24 AM Thanks Upma.

Eve Roper February 11, 2015 at 9:41 AM Congratulaions on this beautiful poem, I asume dedicated to your wife, if it is, I bet it put a big smile on her face. 7 Blessings dear friend Eve Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 10:25 AM She is the source and realization of all my passion. Thanks for the visit and 7 Eve.

Barbara Gorelick February 11, 2015 at 9:01 AM Where have you been all my life? lol. Just wonderful and a big congrats. Barbara Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 9:27 AM ;0). Thanks Barbara!

Poesy Relish February 11, 2015 at 8:15 AM Happy to see this poem at the top... congrats Richard on your deserving win.. nad! Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 8:50 AM Thanks Nadiya.

Eileen Manassian February 11, 2015 at 6:46 AM Congrats on your first place win, Richard. Can't tell you how proud I am of you! See...you will the day with passion. :) Hugs Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 7:40 AM Thanks hugs back to you.

Shadow Hamilton February 11, 2015 at 5:17 AM a true man's idea of indulgence Rick very fine pen congrats on placing 1st hugs Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 7:41 AM I am pleased you chose my indulgence.

Verlena S. Walker February 7, 2015 at 2:32 PM Another 7 Richard... Enjoyed... Verlena Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 2:37 PM Thanks Verlena, I took inspiration from life .

Casarah Nance February 6, 2015 at 6:45 PM And it is writes like this that put you on my heartbreakers list, wow your passion is incredible, your words take my breath away! Love this! Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2015 at 7:00 PM Thanks Casarah you are sweet. You might enjoy my latest piece just in time for Valentines day!

M. L. Kiser February 5, 2015 at 3:46 PM That was an incredible sensory experience! Beautiful and heart felt. Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2015 at 8:59 AM Thanks so much Paul, I appreciate the visit and the 7. Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2015 at 8:58 AM Thanks M.L. :0)

Paul Callus February 5, 2015 at 2:35 PM Very beautiful, Richard; you make good use of this melodious form, and the sensual feel is very evident. #7 // paul Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2015 at 9:00 AM Oops my comment to you jumped up to M.L.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2015 at 7:24 AM - Richard, beautifully written !!! - I wish you best of luck in the contest! - // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux February 5, 2015 at 7:54 AM Thanks Anne Lise!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 5, 2015 at 4:52 AM coconut scented..oh a very common smell in India,I love Coconuts raw or in pastries. Love..rajat Richard Lamoureux February 5, 2015 at 7:20 AM I love Chinese coconut buns, yum!

Constance La France February 5, 2015 at 4:50 AM Richard, your poem is verrrry sexy and I like the use of this form Pantoum, well done and best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry and yes Richard it is part of my life and the reason for my broken wings ~~ Richard Lamoureux February 5, 2015 at 7:19 AM I haven't written in this form for a very long time, I'm pleased you like it. I'm sorry you wrote from actual experience, God cares for the sparrows, how much more does he care for you? Allow Him to heal your broken wings and heart. You are one who is meant to fly. Hugs Rick.

Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 4:35 AM I like the form you have used Richard.. a very passionate write... 'Leaving not a single desire unexpressed Luxuriating in your coconut scented splendor'... beautiful lines... good luck, nad! Richard Lamoureux February 5, 2015 at 7:13 AM Thanks Nadiya for the thoughtful visit.

Eileen Manassian February 5, 2015 at 4:16 AM ummmmmm....yes, well....Ahhhhhh...ahem....OH LA LA...LA LA LA LA LA LA!!! OH LA LA...LA LA LA LA LA LA! I think I've said enough. Good luck in the contest. It's good to read your passionate writes again, Richard. Lovely. Richard Lamoureux February 5, 2015 at 7:09 AM You make me smile Eileen. This one took a lot of adjusting to get it to a point where I felt happy with it. Hugs Eileen. ;0)

Jan Allison February 5, 2015 at 2:14 AM Oh Richard so sensual a write - I relate this to our British 'Bounty' bars - I adore the plain chocolate ones lol - but I guess it could have an alternative meaning too:-) good luck in the contest:-) a 7 from em:-) hugs Jan xx Richard Lamoureux February 5, 2015 at 7:12 AM I call my sweetie my little coconut, I just love that scent. Thanks Jan I appreciate the luck the vist the hug and the seven.