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Indian Summer

The sky is a deep October bright blue, and trees are laying down their pretty leaves; orange, red and brown scatter whereunto, Indian summer and fall interweaves. And trees are laying down their pretty leaves, the morning chill gives way to drowsy heat; Indian summer and fall interweaves, in the park all the birds are singing sweet. The morning chill gives way to drowsy heat, even decaying gardens have beauty; in the park all the birds are singing sweet, but soon the wind will be blowing breezy. Even the decaying gardens have beauty, from my garden I picked the last red rose; but soon the wind will be blowing breezy, soon, the snow will fall and all will be froze. From my garden I picked the last red rose, orange, red and brown scatter whereunto; soon, the snow will fall and all will be froze, the sky is a deep October bright blue. _____________________ October 2, 2017 Pantoum/Indian Summer Copyright Protected, ID 946458
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Dutta Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 12:44 AM
Yes. Indian Summer and Fall interweaves. Also Rainy Season interferes. Enjoyed
Devnath  Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 2:21 PM
An excellent natural poem my lovely dear friend, well done. Very good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Duet Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 1:07 AM
What a lovely poem, Constance. It's like a painting...a beautiful Autumnal painting, colorful and cool. I really enjoyed reading this one.
Hoffman Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Awesome imagery in this beautiful nature poem! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 6:02 PM
this is utterly gorgeous, Constance. You are my last read of the day, now I have to start dinner!!
Krampe Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 3:08 PM
Wow, this is beautiful - and you executed the pantoum form so well. I find this form very intimidating and have never tried one, maybe I shall.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 3:05 PM
A beautiful October display!
May Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:00 PM
A beautiful Pantoum BW...enjoyed
Sergi Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:27 PM
A beautiful poetic way to introduce Fall and Winter, BW, my compliments!
Sivey Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 5:54 AM
This is beautiful Constance! I surely loved reading your masterfully written poem here this morning! You have interwoven the end of summer and the beginning of Autumn quite nicely, as Fall arrives so does the falling temperature, which leads to the frozen days of winter! Great Work my friend!!
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Beautiful, Broken Wings, a winner hugs Eve
La France Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 9:17 AM
Appreciate your comment !
Parker Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:50 PM
beautiful poetry that captures the season as it changes...good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 9:18 AM
Grateful for the comment !
Wanter Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:47 PM
In your writing, you can actually feel the facets of Autumn.
La France Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 9:18 AM
Thanks !
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:46 PM
You did well depicting the lovely imagery..best for a win!
La France Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Appreciate your comment !
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 5:36 PM
such beautiful autumnal imagery Constance i do enjoy reading and writing this form:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Thanks Jan
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