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Indian Summer

The sky is a deep October bright blue, and trees are laying down their pretty leaves; orange, red and brown scatter whereunto, Indian summer and fall interweaves. And trees are laying down their pretty leaves, the morning chill gives way to drowsy heat; Indian summer and fall interweaves, in the park all the birds are singing sweet. The morning chill gives way to drowsy heat, even decaying gardens have beauty; in the park all the birds are singing sweet, but soon the wind will be blowing breezy. Even the decaying gardens have beauty, from my garden I picked the last red rose; but soon the wind will be blowing breezy, soon, the snow will fall and all will be froze. From my garden I picked the last red rose, orange, red and brown scatter whereunto; soon, the snow will fall and all will be froze, the sky is a deep October bright blue. _____________________ October 2, 2017 Pantoum/Indian Summer Copyright Protected, ID 946458

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Date: 10/22/2017 12:44:00 AM
Yes. Indian Summer and Fall interweaves. Also Rainy Season interferes. Enjoyed
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Date: 10/9/2017 2:21:00 PM
An excellent natural poem my lovely dear friend, well done. Very good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/5/2017 1:07:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Constance. It's like a painting...a beautiful Autumnal painting, colorful and cool. I really enjoyed reading this one.
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:55:00 PM
Awesome imagery in this beautiful nature poem! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 10/4/2017 6:02:00 PM
this is utterly gorgeous, Constance. You are my last read of the day, now I have to start dinner!!
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Date: 10/4/2017 3:08:00 PM
Wow, this is beautiful - and you executed the pantoum form so well. I find this form very intimidating and have never tried one, maybe I shall.
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Date: 10/4/2017 3:05:00 PM
A beautiful October display!
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:00:00 PM
A beautiful Pantoum BW...enjoyed
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:27:00 PM
A beautiful poetic way to introduce Fall and Winter, BW, my compliments!
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Date: 10/4/2017 5:54:00 AM
This is beautiful Constance! I surely loved reading your masterfully written poem here this morning! You have interwoven the end of summer and the beginning of Autumn quite nicely, as Fall arrives so does the falling temperature, which leads to the frozen days of winter! Great Work my friend!!
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Date: 10/2/2017 9:23:00 PM
Beautiful, Broken Wings, a winner hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 10/3/2017 9:17:00 AM
Appreciate your comment !
Date: 10/2/2017 6:50:00 PM
beautiful poetry that captures the season as it changes...good luck in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 10/3/2017 9:18:00 AM
Grateful for the comment !
Date: 10/2/2017 6:47:00 PM
In your writing, you can actually feel the facets of Autumn.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/3/2017 9:18:00 AM
Thanks !
Date: 10/2/2017 6:46:00 PM
You did well depicting the lovely imagery..best for a win!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/3/2017 9:19:00 AM
Appreciate your comment !
Date: 10/2/2017 5:36:00 PM
such beautiful autumnal imagery Constance i do enjoy reading and writing this form:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 10/2/2017 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Jan
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