Indian Summer

summer agaon,before us parades and yet,today Setember fades

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Sean Kelly

Date: 10/22/2009 2:49:00 AM

Great piece , today ( thinking aloud ) Is there a " typo " that should be diary ?? Anyhow the Indian Summer has moved on and reality has returned . Wrap up , stay dry ( apart from the odd swifter ) and keep well ...

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/6/2009 8:10:00 AM

You paint the lovliest pictures, Brian. Indian Summer is one of Gods' beautiful gifts that He has given us! Love, Robin

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/30/2009 12:02:00 PM

You summed it up perfectly..what a terrific poem. to my favs. BG

John Freeman

Date: 9/30/2009 11:08:00 AM

Brilliant, good to the last drop. Smile, Sincerely Moses

Sean Kelly

Date: 9/30/2009 9:18:00 AM

As we drink-in her goodness , alas I'm still sober .... For tomorrow will bring-in , that cowboy October !! Indian Summer , still shines here , also Brian ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2009 6:21:00 AM

"Indian Summer" was always a blessing when I lived up North, Brian. There were still beach and picnic days throughout September. But, as you say, October brings cooler temperatures and Northerners unpack their winter clothes. That will not be the case in Florida for at least another month. We're blessed with a bit more "Indian Summer" than most! Great write, Brian! You made me recall my childhood experiences with warm September days. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2009 6:09:00 AM

Are you okay? Yes winter is coming on but right now it is fall. Keep writing. Sara

P Sheart

Date: 9/30/2009 5:12:00 AM

Really like the feeling in this one Brian. A wonderful Crystalline. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia