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Writing Challenge I words, Sponsored by Constance la France

07/05/23

I once was quite indecisive but now I am not so sure, I’ve got to make my mind up but it’s a downright chore! So when two choices are offered and I’ve got to choose some cake, I’ll cut a slice off each of them I can’t afford to make a mistake! If I post this in Constance’s contest it’s early days, it’s not a race, but if I hesitate for a moment I may be tardy and not get a place! Perhaps I should pen another poem but then again I’d have to choose, If I were to chose the other one she may not like it and I’d lose! Once I was quite indecisive but now I’m not very sure, so I really must make a decision but it’s turned into an arduous chore!

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Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2023 10:21:00 AM

Jan, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge I Words, love the image !

Jim Slaughter

Date: 7/9/2023 1:30:00 PM

This reminds me of an old saying I once heard, somewhere: The faster I run the behinder I get. I'm pretty sure I really like this one, Jan...but, then....

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/7/2023 4:43:00 PM

the opening two lines should be made into a sign to place on your wall...really well done Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2023 4:47:00 PM

I may print out the whole poem just to remind me... then again perhaps i wont lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/7/2023 3:40:00 AM

A unique rendition that is so Jannnn...Lovely!! Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2023 4:46:00 PM

thanks so much JCB:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2023 1:09:00 AM

- ... it turned out to be a winning poem, Jan ... never doubt yourself...congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2023 4:46:00 PM

thanks Anne-Lise just a bit of fun lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2023 9:55:00 PM

Really clever one for Constance. Congrats, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2023 4:46:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Paige Hind

Date: 7/6/2023 2:16:00 PM

Cute, lol- liked this; you have a good sense of humor!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2023 4:45:00 PM

thanks Paige:-) hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/6/2023 4:20:00 AM

I'm always amazed at your clever way with words and thoughts, writing poetry that colors the heart and soul and gives meaning to the word brilliant with a added touch of humor. Love love love this. A fave. God bless you, Jan. Love, Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2023 9:11:00 AM

aww Regina your comment is so uplifting and thanks for the fave:-) hugs Jan xx

Deb M

Date: 7/5/2023 10:57:00 PM

Glad you didn't remove it Jan….l really enjoyed this poem its funny and very cleverly done!! Debx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2023 9:10:00 AM

I hope Constance likes it!:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/5/2023 9:09:00 PM

The word is very well explained through your poem, Jan, fun too:)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2023 9:10:00 AM

Glad you found it fun Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/5/2023 5:39:00 PM

Poems posted early or late, we hope still get noticed and not set to the side. I like this one, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2023 9:10:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

Date: 7/5/2023 4:40:00 PM

You know what, Jan. I rather like this… I think. I’m sure (fairly) it will do well in Constance’s contest. All the best (well, a little bit, at least). Terry… Or so I’m lead to believe ;-)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2023 4:52:00 PM

lol Thanks Terry I was debating removing it as I had no comments.. but on second thoughts I decided I would leave it in CASE I got one lol:-) hugs Jan xx