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Indecision

Indecision swooping down jeopardy’s scattered shadows jump up bouncing back then surging forth tender heart scrapes against rocks and hardened faces out of line either or fleeing from cold context’s hungry beast disoriented in fogs of numb pacing inertia starves out undulating choices leaves the inner essence blank unstable adrift on a horizon less sea foot tapping question demands resolution better to risk or to fail 2/3/21 Contest Suzette Prime Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/3/2021 10:18:00 AM

Hi Sus! Thank you so much for your visit and gracious feedback. This was the first time I wrote in this form. I enjoyed the challenge. It's an interesting form with many possibilities. Hope you are well. So glad you enjoyed reading this poem.

Suzette Richards

Date: 3/2/2021 10:27:00 PM

This poetry form is still close to my heart. I really enjoyed how you have interpreted the subject and the final stanza, Sam. ~Sus :))