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Smudges are smeared slightly, broken lines of ink collide, in an attempt to connect the dots one by one and create-- a Masterpiece __________________ ~ Just a little Scribble ~

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Jared Pickett

Date: 1/16/2023 2:08:00 PM

Most times the most simplest of thoughts placed in the right way can create such a vivid picture. The art of poetry is is simply amazing.. Much love

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/16/2023 6:08:00 PM

You're exactly right, Jared. :) Sometimes, less is so much more, when it comes to writing. Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves

Date: 1/1/2020 7:22:00 PM

Like arrows flaming hot... Your words they hit the spot... Connecting all the dots... A masterpiece each shot...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/1/2020 7:52:00 PM

Oh my!!! You have created a poem within your comment. I like this. Thank you for creating a masterpiece within mine. I am smiling. :) Brandy

Funom Makama

Date: 7/30/2019 1:38:00 PM

Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/30/2019 8:28:00 PM

Such a wonderful comment and compliment. Your thoughts truly humble me. Thank you Funom Makama! I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/12/2019 7:37:00 AM

Oh , I like this masterpiece! :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/12/2019 9:41:00 PM

:) Thank you Heidi. Such a wonderful thing to say. You are so kind. Many blessings to you. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2019 6:40:00 PM

what a clever idea so succinctly expressed.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/19/2019 7:28:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Sometimes less is more. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/18/2019 3:09:00 PM

I think you nailed it!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/18/2019 5:45:00 PM

Thank you Allen. So kind of you to say. Just simple thoughts from the heart. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 5/17/2019 7:18:00 AM

Our thoughts become words, and the words become lines on the paper. As the lines come together to connect the dots, you have created a masterpiece. Such wonderful thoughts my sweet poetess friend. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/17/2019 1:41:00 PM

Thank you John. Everything connects when the time is right. Words, colors, moments. And when this happens, a Poem is created, a Masterpiece made. The possibilities are endless. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/17/2019 1:44:00 AM

I think sometimes we look to hard, it takes someone else to point out it's already there. Tom

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/17/2019 11:54:00 AM

You are right Tom. Others can see, what we sometimes cannot. Thank you for your kind words. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 5/16/2019 11:26:00 PM

Brief but very artful. The connected dots are connected very well, and the unconnected ones are best left just so. Good stuff.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/17/2019 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Lawrence. I like scribbling outside the lines. :) Sometimes I like connecting the dots. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/16/2019 3:31:00 PM

Reads like a completed masterpiece to me, Brandy. Certainly a metaphor I find in the form of smudges, smears, and broken lines..to connect dots. It does take a lot to create a masterpiece..and along the way if it feels incomplete..that's because the creator is a perfectionist.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/16/2019 10:15:00 PM

So kind of you to say Vijay. "Beauty is in the Eyes of the Beholder" Thank you for saying this is a "Masterpiece" Even a perfectionist makes mistakes. Knowing this fact, is what makes the creation perfect. Just my simple thinking. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 5/16/2019 1:46:00 PM

A collision that leads to a poem!...Wonderful write Brandy...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/16/2019 10:08:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. Perhaps a poem will form, when colors crash. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy