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In you're loving heart

I will bow down meek gracious queen
kneeling before you love drowning gasps
breathless true everlasting star lighting dream 

Humbling to these eyes one shrine 
speaks gasping in a thousand tongues 
within deep inner beauty magic shines

Adoring warm feelings forever sing 
touching sweetly emotions enchanting bells midnight rings
kissing walls softly inside always fluttering wings 

Between those jewels beams 
I spy the deepest secret loving
a diamond treasure soul brightly gleams

(Terza Rima in Tercet poetic format)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 2/18/2015 5:58:00 AM
You have reached the heights of romanticism and inner beauty, dear Liam!
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Date: 2/17/2015 4:57:00 PM
loving thoughts ,was good to read looking forward to read more of you
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Date: 2/16/2015 6:11:00 PM
Good stuff old pal!
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Date: 2/14/2015 10:37:00 PM
Excellent. Very romantic thoughtful write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs.
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Date: 2/14/2015 4:43:00 PM
Ahh!! So romantic a work for your love on Valentine's Day..I am sure that she enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/14/2015 2:22:00 PM
Very romantic thoughts that could easily have been inspired by this special Valentine's Day! A jewel in a diamond treasure. // paul
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Date: 2/14/2015 2:15:00 PM
Stunning and romantic Liam.......Tim
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Date: 2/14/2015 2:07:00 PM
Hi Liam! Another very beautiful and dazzling Valentine love poem penned by you my dearest friend. A huge 7 +++ from me! Awesome! Another diamond from your pen! I enjoyed it! A very sweet and passionate love poem filled of loves dreams, hopes and promises to be held very close to ones heart. smiling. Love it! Very romantic and filled of love.To me you're the best Liam!Your pen is truly mighty golden!Have a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you always! :) Love and hugs! xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:56:00 PM
a gem of a romantic write Liam:-) xx 7 xx
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:37:00 PM
a very romantic pen Liam... great write... wishing you a Happy Valentines day and a great weekend.. nad!
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:02:00 PM
Sweet romantic write Liam. 7 Bev
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:58:00 PM
Another great write from you my friend. Love what you did with this form. A solid 7 from me....
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:54:00 PM
Great use of the form Liam!
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:48:00 PM
- Liam really beautiful, sensual and romantic - One small diamond .... and you know women and diamonds :))) - I wish you a sweet Valentine's day and a beautiful weekend my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:36:00 PM
Someones in love ! ;) Thank you for sharing your beaming thoughts dear poet ! Have a blessed weekend sir.........much love, james
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Date: 3/29/2015 11:53:00 AM
ah james thank you for the heartfelt beautiful comment wishing you a blessed day sorry its taken me so long