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In These Lines

It's almost dreamlike, the sun shimmering on the water, faces passing by, the pier hung with flags. I could be anyone, tethered to a silver chord sent out from the yearnings of a distant mind deep in sleep. Or maybe something more exotic made up of the feathery light leftovers drifting down from the wake of a passing angel, the whispery float of dust marking passage to the divine. Everything seems unreal. I cannot measure the shape that contains me, but have become what I behold, shimmerings, shadows, the reflected images moving across a window, the air drunk on the smell of wattle. Now can you see what I have become - this vague notion looking for a way out of a shifting world to live in the lines of a poem.

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Date: 7/24/2023 4:57:00 AM
In your lines I see the imagination of a poet who has wandered far and wide into the depths of his mind, heart, and nature. One who believes in angel dust, shimmering shadows, and the possibility of living within the lines of his poetry. Would that we could, Paul... so would I.
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Date: 7/23/2023 6:48:00 AM
I'm reading this sat in a architecturally beautiful building Paul having just participated in silent meditation - there's definitely a vibe that contributes to the beauty of your words. However, I think I could read this sat staring at two wire fences and be transported across the oceans and feel like I'm looking at the same magic that you describe and experiencing such gentle introspection - simply amazing :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/24/2023 4:23:00 AM
Now that's what I need....some silent meditation to still my thought tossed mind. Thanks DD for your kind words, your encouragement always valued.
Date: 7/23/2023 5:33:00 AM
sounds like the muse is plotting a jail break or at least an afternoon soiree with a passing breeze blown cloud. Nicely written Paul
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/24/2023 4:16:00 AM
True...however always arrives a little late and the fare short paid by a word or two. I keep trying. Thanks John

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