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in the ticking of my clock

-----in the ticking of my clock i find numbers running in seconds, in circles moving forward ----yet somehow, also moving backward? too similar, too familiar as the thoughts running in my head. 235a23872316

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/4/2011 11:05:00 AM
A fly no more was he, made me chuckle with this one Nikko. Congrats on your win....:)
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Date: 2/22/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations Nikko on your win in Michael J. Falotico's contest "A Fly On The Wall". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2011 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this witty poem, much fun to read~~
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Date: 2/8/2011 3:06:00 PM
Nikko.Hope to see you posting soon. Check out the recent Blues tanka contest. That is one you should like. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2011 8:37:00 AM
Hi Nikko - Congratulations on your WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:47:00 AM
Thanks for commenting on my blog. Your poem is so fun, and congrats on your win~~
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:07:00 AM
Congrats Nikko on your win in the contest with this funny Limerick....:)
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:18:00 AM
Oops! I meant congrats on your win! lol Jimmy
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:16:00 AM
Cute Limerick...Good luck in the contest. Jimmy
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Date: 2/3/2011 7:08:00 AM
Excellent creative idea..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting about my hot poem..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2011 7:33:00 PM
Congratulations Nikko, on a poem well done. How are you? I'm like you way behind on my comments. I think I need to hire someone to make me comments. LOL, my sisters is to busy. And Royal~ is being to lazy.. Thanks for the mail. Told you i'm behind. I'm just getting it now. And I forgot about my contest. I will close it tonight, or by morning. Take care.. Luv*Skat
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:04:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, nikko
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Date: 2/2/2011 8:00:00 AM
congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:20:00 PM
I missed this one!Congratulations Nikko.I have fixed that IF problem.Thanks a lot:)kashinath
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Date: 2/1/2011 6:39:00 PM
this is really cute, Nikko. I had not even known you posted it! Congratulations. soupmail.
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Date: 2/1/2011 5:35:00 PM
congratulations on your win Nikko,
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:35:00 PM
Congrats, Nikko. Well deserved win. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:34:00 PM
Now THAT is really funny, Nikko. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:32:00 PM
great win nikko. Congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/1/2011 2:55:00 PM
Well you know you had me laughing with this one!!! Very good , and same as your Fly is, you are too my dear off the wall lol...thank for entering and being you...luv Michael
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Date: 2/1/2011 2:31:00 PM
Congrats Nikko my sweet friend so dear on your big win in Michael's first contest with this terrific write and entry luv.. enjoy another sweet success my friend...
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Date: 2/1/2011 10:05:00 AM
Yep! Dat fly got P.O.ed. Love it. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/1/2011 6:56:00 AM
so silly...SOUP MAIL
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:45:00 PM
Good limerick. An entertaining read.
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Date: 1/31/2011 2:05:00 PM
You fly selected a good place seems to be very very innovative, nikko
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