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In the Ticking of My Clock

-----in the ticking of my clock

i find


numbers running in seconds,
 in circles

moving forward


----yet 

somehow,

also moving backward?

too similar,

too familiar

as the

thoughts

running 

 in

 my 

  head.


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James Fraser

April 4, 2011 at 11:05 AM

A fly no more was he, made me chuckle with this one Nikko. Congrats on your win....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 22, 2011 at 10:35 AM

Congratulations Nikko on your win in Michael J. Falotico's contest "A Fly On The Wall". Love, Carol

Constance La France

February 10, 2011 at 1:56 PM

Congratulations on your win with this witty poem, much fun to read~~

Andrea Dietrich

February 8, 2011 at 3:06 PM

Nikko.Hope to see you posting soon. Check out the recent Blues tanka contest. That is one you should like. LUv,Andrea

Kory Calhoun

February 5, 2011 at 8:37 AM

Hi Nikko - Congratulations on your WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC

Constance La France

February 4, 2011 at 6:47 AM

Thanks for commenting on my blog. Your poem is so fun, and congrats on your win~~

James Fraser

February 3, 2011 at 11:07 AM

Congrats Nikko on your win in the contest with this funny Limerick....:)

Jimmy Anderson

February 3, 2011 at 10:18 AM

Oops! I meant congrats on your win! lol Jimmy

Jimmy Anderson

February 3, 2011 at 10:16 AM

Cute Limerick...Good luck in the contest. Jimmy

Sara Kendrick

February 3, 2011 at 7:08 AM

Excellent creative idea..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting about my hot poem..Sara

Skat A

February 2, 2011 at 7:33 PM

Congratulations Nikko, on a poem well done. How are you? I'm like you way behind on my comments. I think I need to hire someone to make me comments. LOL, my sisters is to busy. And Royal~ is being to lazy.. Thanks for the mail. Told you i'm behind. I'm just getting it now. And I forgot about my contest. I will close it tonight, or by morning. Take care.. Luv*Skat

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 2, 2011 at 4:04 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, nikko

Debbie Guzzi

February 2, 2011 at 8:00 AM

congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Kash Poet

February 1, 2011 at 11:20 PM

I missed this one!Congratulations Nikko.I have fixed that IF problem.Thanks a lot:)kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

February 1, 2011 at 6:39 PM

this is really cute, Nikko. I had not even known you posted it! Congratulations. soupmail.

Robert A. Dufresne

February 1, 2011 at 5:35 PM

congratulations on your win Nikko,

Ralph Taylor

February 1, 2011 at 3:35 PM

Congrats, Nikko. Well deserved win. Nice going. Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

February 1, 2011 at 3:34 PM

Now THAT is really funny, Nikko. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

February 1, 2011 at 3:32 PM

great win nikko. Congratulations. Love, joyce

Michael J. Falotico

February 1, 2011 at 2:55 PM

Well you know you had me laughing with this one!!! Very good , and same as your Fly is, you are too my dear off the wall lol...thank for entering and being you...luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 1, 2011 at 2:31 PM

Congrats Nikko my sweet friend so dear on your big win in Michael's first contest with this terrific write and entry luv.. enjoy another sweet success my friend...